Check out my squidoo lens please

Hi
I created a squidoo lens to see how it works out and if I can get some more people to visit my site but I hadn't had any succes with it. It also looks pretty crappy
Could you please take a look at it and make suggestions about how I should improve it?
Thanks

http://www.squidoo.com/lensmaster/workshop/dailyjoke

 

Hello!

I'd love to see a lens with daily jokes! I don't think you have finished pubishing yours though, because the link you gave is to your lensmaster workshop. That page is only available for you to view.

Don't feel bad, I've done that too!

When you build your lens, you add the modules you want, and fill them with links and information. Then before anyone else can see it, you have to click on the big orange "Publish" button. The URL you end up at will probably be:
http://www.squidoo.com/ldailyjoke

But that URL doesn't work right now, because you haven't finished the publish process. This is a safety mechanism for use while you are in the construction phase, so you don't have to put up an incomplete lens.

So once you have the modules in place, and information in them, you can publish it, then folks can come to visit you!

If you need any help or have any questions, I'll be happy to help you! I'm a Citizen Squid and we like to offer assistnace to new users! Feel free to contact me!

Marti Lawrence
http://www.squidoo.com/lensmasters/Marti

 

um yeah if you post the currect URL i'd be happy to check it out.
mine is at:
http://www.squidoo.com/pdxdirect/

 

It is not crappy. Nice colors and very clean design idea. Move “lean more” menu items on the orange, and explore lenses! up making smaller looking like the slogan at the logo. Good luck!

 

here's the correct link to it:
http://www.squidoo.com/dailyjoke
I wonder how many hits it need to get into top 100

 

put up some pictures to make it look attractive ..

 

I've set up a module for each joke and put a picture for each module. What do you think now?

 

Yep...good idea.

 

looks pretty good.

 

I also have a daily joke list on Squidoo if you would like to take a look. I haven't been active long enough to post links yet - but by lens is called "thedailyjoke_March2008"

Any comments and suggestions are welcome. If you want to swap links with any of my Squidoo lenses, as long as your link is relevant, please let me know.

 

Rubbish m8

 

looks good

 

Good looking page with different concept. Nice.

 

Nice lens.. Great jokes and had a good laugh for about an hour.. Keep up the great work on your lens