This is my first attempt at creating a flash movie. I've been using it as my stepping stone to learning flash with SwishMax. Good or bad, I'd love to hear your thoughts, suggestions, etc. Here
not bad for a first attempt - not sure how much of that comes from SwishMax though. You probably want to have the replay button kill the audio before jumping to the start of the movie though. I sthis the right place for a flash movie? I gotta say I hate noisy movies in my webpage - makes it hard to browse at work....
I don't know. I'm still debating. That's why I haven't changed the real home page yet. I'm not a fan of noisy sites either. So I'm on the fence with this one.
As Stuw said, its a good start. I would review the white dashes that are trying to make it look sparkly, looks more like little white workms runing over it. Try a few less of them and slow them down, should make it look more realistic. I would also suggest developing your flash movie a little bit more, put some more information in there your visitors whould be looking for, maybe link it to an image gallery.