$150 for the winner $50 second place for designing a bag label

my entry

 

Davey: #56 is really growing on me. Very simple and very stylish. I am not so sure about that oval behind the logo. Nevertheless, I can now see the potential of this design and will let you know if you're in the finalists and if so, once I am ready to choose the winners I may ask for some slight modifications.

Mora: thanks for the new tries. The issue is not with english. Your english is fine. English is not my first language either. In fact I am from a country that came second to the Czech republic in their qualifying group for Germany 2006. The issue is with understanding what I want to get across. I think you now understood what I am after and even though your entries have improved a lot, still your entries are not what I am after. Your latest entry looks the strongest but it's still not one of the finalists. It's got potential and I could develop it into something that I want but unfortunately there are a lot of other strong entries closer to what I am after.

Weblazer: #58 Thanks for the new entry but it's a little too complex. The text you used makes it a little hard to read. Look at Davey's entry (#56) as an example and you will see his is very easy to read. I am not saying to copy his entry, what I am saying is that from a text point of view his is easier to read while yours is a little harder. It is because the text is a little hard to read that I cannot consider yours. Otherwise I can't fault it. The text needs to be easier to read.

Watari: thanks for entering this. It follows a lot of my instructions but the only problem is that I happen to have some stronger entries. While yours looks OK, it's got a little too much white for my liking. Thanks for placing the label on the bag. It makes it easier to judge. It looks just a touch too rough. For me to consider it it needs to look a little more stylish but I am not sure how you can achieve this. Perhaps by making the text under whey protein concentrate a little smaller? If you do consider doing changes please keep in mind there are already some strong entries that you will have to compete with.

nwsn3twrkshp: again you've submitted a very pleasant design. However, it is just a touch too complex. Please don't feel scared to try something simple. I prefer simple as long as it's not plain. It also has a little too much white and I prefer a mainly red background. Other than these points I can't fault it and it looks good.

To anyone else considering changes or considering entering it: please understand that I prefer simple designs in this case over complex ones. However, what I don't like are plain designs (Simple, YES, Plain NO).

 

my other entry

 

Thanks nw. Still got too much white in it. I played around with it a little and removed the white and it's looking a lot better. I will let you know once I decide on the finalists.

To give you and everyone else an idea where I'm at, the designs I am considering the most (in no particular order) are: ariestoteles (all of them), DaveyBoy #56, Imba #54 (even though not quite there), coolwanz (#42 but I will need them in red) and IM3D #49 (because it's mainly red).

I need to get some rest now so thanks to everyone who entered and who is considering this. I must say there are some really great entries. Thanks for making this hard to choose a winner guys

 

thanks for the feedback i appreciated most ty..

 

Ok,
I guess you are Netherlander... or it was Romania, I'm not sure - I've got bad memory on matches
So, here is my last try..
Thanks again for all feedbacks, I appreciate it alot.
Good Luck to All

 

Hi here is one from me too!

 

my entry



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feedback appreciated

 

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Very nice man

 

My entry

 

Another slight change :

 

pff..nice entries...this will be a great challenge for me as I consider entering, ofcourse if the contest will still be open tomorrow

 

I promise this is my last entry lol :





Cheers,
Davey.

 

Thanks guys for the submissions. I am just having breakfast now and I need to head to work soon. I will definitely come back with feedback. I appreciate your effort and I don't want to just simply post in a hurry without giving detailed reviews.

 

Design Revision as requested:
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