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Please Review Our Business Website!!

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by ajaonyx47, Feb 12, 2008.

  1. #1
    Anyone care to provide any critique of our website in the following areas??

    * Does the "product" come across clear??
    * Does the business opportunity make itself readily available??

    Any other suggestions / comments??

    http://HoneyIShrunkOurMortgage.com

    Thanks!!
     
    ajaonyx47, Feb 12, 2008 IP
  2. cssorized

    cssorized Peon

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    #2
    timeismoney.jpg is a bit distracting.
     
    cssorized, Feb 12, 2008 IP
  3. ajaonyx47

    ajaonyx47 Peon

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    Supposed to be eye-catching ...

    Anything else ....???
     
    ajaonyx47, Feb 12, 2008 IP
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    cssorized Peon

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    #4
    You need to make it more clear, an example is having the date at the top, that has no purpose. You do not need to fill up all the space with text.

    The part that starts with "Let us give you the Financial Power & Confidence to say" is what should stand out, get inspiration from those get-rich-quick scam pages, those are very good at manipulating a user into taking action.
     
    cssorized, Feb 12, 2008 IP
  5. shivam

    shivam Peon

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    Nice, but 1) remove email address and have contact us page otherwise you will get lots of spam email to your inbox.

    2) i was thinking to suggest about metatags but it would not let me right click, why did you block right?
     
    shivam, Feb 12, 2008 IP
  6. ajaonyx47

    ajaonyx47 Peon

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    We blocked right click access because we actually had an issue with someone "taking" our website ... putting his own name on it ... and advertising it ... so we had to take a few steps to protect ourselves ... as much as we can ...

    No real spam email to the inbox ... yet ... a few I suppose ...

    Thanks for the input ...
     
    ajaonyx47, Feb 13, 2008 IP
  7. schemansky

    schemansky Active Member

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    I think this web site is a bit confusing. Also, the domain name doesn't make me take this seriously. However, the domain name would make a great book title.
    I would get a more serious sounding domain name for this web site, get rid of all the extra stuff and just make a simple sales page that you scroll down to read. Then a buy now button half way down the page, and at the bottom. Also put testimonials along the sides perhaps.
     
    schemansky, Feb 13, 2008 IP
  8. WhatsTheRent

    WhatsTheRent Peon

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    #8
    my initial reaction is that there is too much text. lots of different sizes, colors, and styles.

    I like the domain name, good thinking.
     
    WhatsTheRent, Feb 13, 2008 IP
  9. ajaonyx47

    ajaonyx47 Peon

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    #9
    The domain name is in this case ... the "million dollar idea" ... that one moment of creativity has paid off very handsomely ... as the domain name is very memorable ... when someone sees it or hears it ... they are unlikely to forget it ...

    I do appreciate all the input ... I am looking at doing some site redesign in the next week or two ... streamline it a little bit ... make the FREE analysis and Business Opportunity stand out a little more ... change the colors perhaps ...
     
    ajaonyx47, Feb 14, 2008 IP
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    MyEggNoodles Peon

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    #10
    GREAT domain - Love it :)
     
    MyEggNoodles, Feb 14, 2008 IP
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    #11
    Great name and the site looks great! Check out this thread to read about how to receive a free onsite analysis of your website: http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showthread.php?t=699320

    JWR Media reviewed one of my websites within hours of my request to do so. I liked his service so much that I wrote a positive review of his services. Click here to read the service review!
     
    RickNHS, Feb 14, 2008 IP
  12. ajaonyx47

    ajaonyx47 Peon

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    Why Thank You ... we LOVE it as well ... it has been a wonderful new business for us that is really taking off!!
     
    ajaonyx47, Feb 15, 2008 IP
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    #13
    The domain is awesome, eye catching! Nice job I thing
     
    bestmatch, Feb 17, 2008 IP
  14. ajaonyx47

    ajaonyx47 Peon

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    Thank you all for your positive comments ...

    Taking a look at doing a site redesign ... I'll post it for review when I have it done ... probably in the next week or so ...
     
    ajaonyx47, Feb 18, 2008 IP
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    NTWWeb Peon

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    #15
    Wow good and soso reviews but I tend to agree with the soso. Contact page would get the weeds (digital noise) down a bit.

    IE munches it a bit...

    Message is not clear so sorry but IMO site does not instill trust.

    It's work but I know you can do better laying out your content. Get to work!! LOL Good luck.
     
    NTWWeb, Feb 18, 2008 IP
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    webblab Guest

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    #16
    from the side of web standards - site design, accessibility and usability are very bad.. You could hire a better designer.
     
    webblab, Feb 19, 2008 IP
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    SEOBusiness Well-Known Member

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    #17
    Good looking site.

    but you can place your contact details at the footer of your homepage.

     
    SEOBusiness, Feb 19, 2008 IP
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    #18
    The site looks very professional, clear layout.
     
    votingserver, Feb 20, 2008 IP
  19. ajaonyx47

    ajaonyx47 Peon

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    All ... I did a complete site redesign this past weekend ... if anyone who previously provided feedback cares to take a look ...

    Thanks,

    Raymond
     
    ajaonyx47, Mar 12, 2008 IP
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    benetonas123 Guest

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    #20
    Nice domain but design is so ... bad :confused:
     
    benetonas123, Mar 12, 2008 IP