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Discussion in 'Websites' started by Jelleke60, Dec 9, 2007.

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    Hey,

    Could som1 please review http://www.lostworld.be/s-designs/ ?

    How is the Layout?

    How is the Site?

    I M dutch so their are spelling error could som1 list them?

    Thx alot,

    Jelle
     
    Jelleke60, Dec 9, 2007 IP
  2. Jelleke60

    Jelleke60 Active Member

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    14 vieuws 0 comments?
     
    Jelleke60, Dec 9, 2007 IP
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    xtremerock Banned

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    #3
    Im the first one?
    man people are becoming lazy these days!

    Here:

    this is awesome! Love the design! Its really nice. green and kinda dark! really great choice. Love the language also!
     
    xtremerock, Dec 9, 2007 IP
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    TwistOffMedia Well-Known Member

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    love the design, nice balance green and black loving it! GJ :]
     
    TwistOffMedia, Dec 9, 2007 IP
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    lojadeluxo Well-Known Member

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    #5
    try to change the background of the butons...
     
    lojadeluxo, Dec 9, 2007 IP
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    Pinup Girl Notable Member

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    i dont like the vertical buttons
     
    Pinup Girl, Dec 9, 2007 IP
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    Though you use a darker green, your design is nice, jelle! :)
     
    crazycatsville, Dec 9, 2007 IP
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    suzipatrik Peon

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    Layout is good, but the color choice is quite dark, vertical buttons is good choice. Instead of using word i, use "we provide", it will affect positively on visitors...........
    Try to change the contents of website, the language used is low level which will not attract the visitors.
    In about us page "If you want to know somthing more, contact me then! A picture will be added soon when i got the right one" ...........lots of grammatical mistakes, you can write
    "want to know more Click Here" and enter the link of that page in click here part..............

    Gud Luck "cheers"
     
    suzipatrik, Dec 9, 2007 IP
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    bsklep Well-Known Member

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    You must work harder ;)

    Try to add some space in the left, between black background/green SPACE and your text.

    Menu looks.. bad, try use other color, light.
     
    bsklep, Dec 9, 2007 IP
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    Lhlalyam Well-Known Member

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    Hello Jelleke60

    As mentioned before in your previous post.... I'd recommend changing the gray buttons quickly. I'd also recommend that you create some spacing for your text and the edge of the content area.

    Lhlalyam
     
    Lhlalyam, Dec 9, 2007 IP
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    mayavfx Banned

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    yes me too the verical buttons not that nice
     
    mayavfx, Dec 10, 2007 IP
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    Thx all for the review!
     
    Jelleke60, Dec 10, 2007 IP