PLease review my basic websites

hi, i built these on freewebs, as a way to try and get these kind of sites at school without using a proxy [will get expelled] they are VERY basic, but can you please review them. the games site will be getting a new look soon,

www.webgames4u.page.tl
www.excuses.co.nr
www.coolvideos.co.nr

constructive critisim

 

Very basic. Comic sans font on the first looks like your page is made by a kiddo.

Also the colors are too contrasting that can be seem to irritating to the eyes.

 

Layout is not that attractive... Free sub-domains are pretty meh

 

well considering they are made so that you can play games at school without using a proxy, i think i did them alright. what is the point on making it flashy when its for playing at school?

 

Add some color. Make the images blend...archive some content. Maybe you could use a CMS.

 

looks basic but i guess it'll do the job just fine

 

I think it looks very neat and professional. Not cluttered. I don't like busy sites anyway.

 

They're okay, but some of the colors are quite irritable to the eyes.

 

Yes, quite basic and template looking, but somewhat usable.

 

yeah, basic design, use some dhtml, java menus to put some collor on your pages, or a flash menu, there are tons of programs you can use to design the buttons, and you might consider changing the colors too...

 

Ok. i just loved the websites!

 

Improve the colors

 

in the procces of giving the games site a complete makeover.

will be open soon!

 

Two of the three sites are coming up with a blank screen for me - the top and bottom sites

 

they do that sometimes. dont know why.