My landing page doesn't convert :(

Arghhh, my landing page doesn't convert... please take a look and tell me what I'm doing wrong.

Bookmarking Demon

I have had around 500 visitors, but there have only been 2 sales

Thanks, Mads

 

Are you promoting it to the right people?

-T

 

Dang, looks good to me.

 

probably most people would still prefer to purchase using their own aff link.
Maybe you could sell your guide seperatly?

 

From the looks of it, you read the book "Affiliate X"

 

You are selling it for $49 and they are doing it for $97

 

Good thinking, that's a very real danger when selling internet marketing products

 

Some suggestions/comments:

* Way too long, think with a more basic approach to human behavior, message & call to action, monetize on reaction. Reading alllllll that, then clicking to the merchant only to see another read that is 2-3 times as long will deter most, especially considering this market usually targets those that are desperate and looking to learn/earn fast...

* Marketing to marketers is quite difficult, perhaps grab a few books/info on marketing outside the IM realm, just great old advertising/business/monetizing markets...

* As most CB products, there is a lack of branding, no real style guide, no use of typography, graphics, pictures, comoposition, color pallettes, balance/white space etc.

* In short, your main focus is (or should be in the long run) to monetize, and fast, just like your students/traffic want to learn from you. The only thing that matters is that click through, in as little time as possible. You don't want to retain them on the page, you want to get them off the page ASAP!

* I have made a video about landers and how to make them effective here

All my best, hope this helps you.
NC.

 

yes you definately read project x, the page looks good but the only
reason I think that it is not converting is
- thats an old product
- people prefer to buy through their links nowadays
other wise maybe you need to redo your keywords and your ads

 

If the conversion problem is mainly due to people buying through their own affiliate links, then the solution is to "sell" your bonus really hard. I think you take too long to get to that point.

It also might help if you could offer automated verification and delivery of your bonus. I've found that it makes me look much more professional, compared to the old "forward your receipt and wait for me to confirm your order" method. See link in my sig for more info.

 

Great Advice
- yeah what he/she said :]
lol.