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I need an native English speaker, please

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by ForumJoiner, Oct 30, 2007.

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    I wrote the first chapter from an eBook called "Free Targeted Traffic".
    I'm not an English native speaker. I'm afraid some sentences from that eBook
    sound awkwardly to a native.

    If someone would like to take the time to read the first chapter and to tell me the opinions, I'll put his/her name and a link to his/her website on the first page (that is, on the first page after the cover).

    If more than one person will be doing this, the first 10 will be mentioned.
     
    ForumJoiner, Oct 30, 2007 IP
  2. the Patrician

    the Patrician Well-Known Member

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    Good day,

    I've sent you a PM with the details for proofreading your chapter for you. This is a process I already do for a couple of friends who have English as their second language so I am familiar with cleaning up grammar and syntax.

    TTYL8r :cool:
     
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    ForumJoiner Active Member

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    I don't know how to mention this without upsetting anyone, but all I can offer for the help I hope to receive in this matter is to mention the name and the site of the person(s) who helped me.

    The link to the chapter 1 is this.
     
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    niknar1900 Active Member

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    I'm currently reading it now, I'll PM you, alright?
    PM'ed good luck!
     
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    ForumJoiner Active Member

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    That would be just fine. Thank you.

    I also attached here a doc version.
     
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    carpathios Peon

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    I proofed chapter 1 and sent you a PM.
     
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