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Review my $250 Service and Website Please!

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Rage, Oct 8, 2007.

  1. #1
    My service site is located at

    http://tinyurl.com/yrsquu

    I am offering $250 web development.

    Let me know your thoughts.

    Thanks,
    Rage
     
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  2. watchfootball

    watchfootball Well-Known Member

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    Nice design and good price for a 6 page site if it will look as good as your site.

    Could you do something for cheap-football . com ?

    Thanls
     
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  3. Lhlalyam

    Lhlalyam Well-Known Member

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    Hello.

    I like most of the design of the site. I just find that the background tends to make your site look buldgy at the top and bottom and thin in the center. Layout is awesome.... Very simple navigation... so easy for people to understand... What I like most... is how you simplified your Marketing to one specific area.... Nice Job!

    One other thing I tested was XHTML validation which showed 14 errors. Might not be a goal for your site but just thought I'd test it.

    Just as a note: I'm using FireFox on PClinuxOS 2007

    Lhlalyam
     
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  4. nabil_kadimi

    nabil_kadimi Well-Known Member

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    #4
    Nice looking website, here are my suggestions:
    - remove the XHTML error,
    - remove tables and use divs if possible
    - add more top & bottom padding around the container (I would say 10 to 20px)
    - use a smaller image on your home page
    ...
     
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  5. Rage

    Rage Well-Known Member

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    Thanks a lot :)

    Thanks alot, and thanks for suggestions, will defiantly think about it,

    Thanks :) i think the suggestion about adding spacing in top and bottom is cool...
     
    Rage, Oct 9, 2007 IP
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    #6
    but put some testimonials to get credibility and better results..

    goodluck
     
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  7. Rage

    Rage Well-Known Member

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    Thanks Manisha :)

    ______________________________

    Now validated XHTML
     
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    afham07 Active Member

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    Cool looking website I would say. Thumbs up! ..
     
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    Nice site. Good layout. Easy to navigate.

    Nice price for a 6 page site.

    Testimonials will help a great deal.

    Tina
     
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    rentdn Well-Known Member

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    Well everything is done very professionally I liked it - nice job
     
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    Rage Well-Known Member

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    Thanks a lot :)

    Thanks a lot... i asked my clients for testimonials, i will surely publish them

    Thank you soo much!
     
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    Rage Well-Known Member

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    Can u also advice me that how to boost up my sales?
     
    Rage, Oct 10, 2007 IP
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    #13
    Hi, Rage. I'm new here, but I'm a dev myself, so I've got a little advice...
    I like the site. It looks rather professional. Although I'd be curious to see what it would look like with the background image's colours entirely inverted - maybe it'd help focus on the main content.

    I like the "Flat-Fee" approach, but you need to work on your copywriting - for example, the line:

    "Our Average time of delivery is 2 to 4 days, however in maximum 7 days."

    Could be clarified, and made more positive, thus:

    "Our maximum turnaround time is seven days, with an average of between two and four days."

    And:

    "3: Unlimited Revise Designing untill your satisfaction."

    Could be phrased better:

    "3: Unlimited Design Revisions - we'll keep going until you're 100% satisfied."

    I see there's a whole forum on here for the subject of copy writing, so someone in there should be able to help you out. Or, if you'd prefer to save some money and do it yourself, I'd recommend checking out "Elements of Style" by Strunk & White. It's very short, very concise, and is the single fastest way to improve your writing a hundredfold.

    I'd also make your "Learn More" link a little more prominent.

    Other than that, it all looks good. :)
     
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    Rage Well-Known Member

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    Thanks a lot for such a wonderful review....

    I think each suggestion of your's needs to be done immediately,

    I will do all of the changes you said.

    Thanks a lot.... this is the best review i ever got :)


    Reps Added!
     
    Rage, Oct 10, 2007 IP
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    zigster Well-Known Member

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    #15
    First all of my positive feedback:

    Very professional looking
    Nice Logo
    Very nice layout

    The only thing that I thought REALLY stood out was that HUGE HAND. Wow! I usually like to give my "first thought" to anybody asking for a review and that was it. Wow, that is a big hand. It definitely captured my attention and I don't know if that is what you were looking for.

    But overall great work!
     
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    Rage Well-Known Member

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    yes... i think you are right, i am working to replace hand woth somthing more interesting :)

    Thanks a lot

    ____________________________UPDATE_________________________________

    I've changed the Picture (main) and Back-ground too :)

    hope its looking better now http://tinyurl.com/yrsquu
     
    Rage, Oct 10, 2007 IP