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Please Review My Site

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Freelance GD, Sep 27, 2007.

  1. #1
    Hello Friends,

    I am working on a site and this is what I came up with: www.articlesfactory.info/dugloo

    I need some feedback/suggestions or even criticism.

    Thanks in advacne.

    ~F-GD
     
    Freelance GD, Sep 27, 2007 IP
  2. tushardhoot1

    tushardhoot1 Active Member

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    Design is wonderful. 8/10

    You need a logo, and to finish all the rest of the pages on the site. Also, you might want to put a lot of the keywords your targeting on the homepage, as its a pretty competitive market.
     
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    eruct Well-Known Member

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    the design is nice and clean.
    However, I think you need to do something to get people to read the text at the bottom, as that is what your site is all about. At the size and color that it is now, it looks like some Terms of Service agreement or other legal mumbo-jumbo.
     
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    Freelance GD Well-Known Member

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    Its my client's site so, he will be doing this stuff :). Thanks bro.

    You are right. I will have to add some graphics there to get attention. Thank you for your comments.

    ~F-GD

    PS: I like the phrase legal mumbo-jumbo :)
     
    Freelance GD, Sep 27, 2007 IP
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    bnandika Well-Known Member

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    Because you use light color for the body background and white for the content, it would be better put shadow on the content background or use simple texture on the body (slant, box etc) to clearer the margin between body and content.
     
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  6. Freelance GD

    Freelance GD Well-Known Member

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    thank you bnandika for your comments and suggestions. I have made some changes in there. See how it looks now.

    Thanks again. Reps added.
     
    Freelance GD, Sep 28, 2007 IP
  7. tushardhoot1

    tushardhoot1 Active Member

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    Really nice....

    I know I reviewed before, but just another suggestion. Can 'Order Now' button in the center of the page be made into a link (Imagemap) so when you click it it takes you to the order page? Its right dead center and would probably generate more clicks.
     
    tushardhoot1, Sep 28, 2007 IP
  8. Freelance GD

    Freelance GD Well-Known Member

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    I didn't get you. You mean text button?

    Thank you
     
    Freelance GD, Sep 29, 2007 IP