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Short sentence - which is better?

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by AdamSee, Jun 5, 2007.

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  1. AdamSee

    AdamSee Well-Known Member

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    #21
    No, it's overcast though and pretty cold.

    If I were a writer. My style would be like yours. I know it and like your energy!

    Thanks again and will keep in touch.
     
    AdamSee, Jun 6, 2007 IP
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    latoya Active Member

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    #22
    I was specifically looking forward to your response Jason. You deliver everytime :)
     
    latoya, Jun 6, 2007 IP
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    marketjunction Well-Known Member

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    #23
    Oh thanks. :)

    I hope your financial PLR service is going well.
     
    marketjunction, Jun 6, 2007 IP
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    sadhivm Guest

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    #24
    use all three at the same time for about a week

    track each one in terms of ctr and anc actual conversions

    the one with the highest ctr and conversions is the winner - without testing you will never know

    it is not what you think that matters or anyone else in this thread. what matters is how the people you are targetting react

    once you have a winner that is then your "control" then you keep working to improve your control
     
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    NathanielJ Active Member

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    #25
    As easy as is definitely the expression that you need. There's no need for further discussions.
     
    NathanielJ, Jun 7, 2007 IP
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    #26
    I agree: put the Porsche first and follow it with how easy it is.

    Another variation =

    Win this Porche 977. Easy, like A B C... P!

    Phil
     
    southwark, Jun 8, 2007 IP
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    internetauthor Peon

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    #27
    I think Jason's (MarketJunction) has this one wrapped up. ABC or 123 may be "Web 2.0" but it is trite and extremely overused. Potential customers simply tune out anything they've already seen 1,000 times on other sites or mailings...

    Rebecca
     
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