bodybuilding site!

Discussion in 'Websites' started by untouchable90, May 27, 2007.

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    www.buildurbody.com

    its up now last time i posted it screwed up sorry about that but here it is! what you guys think? all suggestions welcome. im adding a forum and contest section soon.... the articles and so fourth are on their way too...
     
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  2. funkymario

    funkymario Notable Member

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    well i dont know where to start, first the black font is not appropriate, something blue or red will be better for a musculation websites second there is very little content on your website, its like an MFA WEBSITE, seriously you have a lot of work to do.. you should considere rebuilding this site, one thing that is good is the logo, very nice :)
     
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  3. Darins

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    #3
    I think your website is boring..
    you need to add more picture there
    but not to much, because it will slowing down your site..
    just add picture as 'eye catching..'
     
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    M.Zeeshan Banned

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    yeah man its booring hav't any pic just google adds are available
    and not soo much section first manage your site then start frum and other section
    ratting from me 1.5/10
     
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    #5
    i kinda like the design and the logo but you've got errors on your page and as mentioned it does look a little too much like its intended for click throughs. I think body builders also like pics so that could help.
     
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    #6
    Nice logo! Your adsense units are well blending into your layout.. I think it needs a paragraph of.. just text...
     
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    Yes .. add more text, now you can see only ads. :D
     
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  8. untouchable90

    untouchable90 Peon

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    dudes like i said i had all the articles and images up on pages but had to start over :( the guy at panecta shut his hosting! i lost my database so im adding everything again once i have some up ill bring this thread backup and then tell me k
     
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    untouchable90 Peon

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    RovingCalypso Well-Known Member

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    #10
    Nice ad placement and good logo but your site looks a bit bare, if you know what I mean. Lots of empty space. Try adding some relevant backgroun and/or more content.
     
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    I think it looks good. I love the logo and the general design is good. As other people have said, many a bit of text on the home page? It does look a tiny bit bare...
     
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    well the homepage will be bare but im adding a hall of fame and more articles, not sure what else i can add to the homepage!?
     
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    Think it looks ok :) logo is nice btw!
     
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    Nima Well-Known Member

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    #14
    Here are my two cents:

    - I don't like the adsense on the header (the header looks too empty)
    - Make left navigation stretch as much down as the main part of the website goes
    - Use slightly larger fonts on the left menu and in the articles
    - Build links around the web...

    Otherwise I like the website...

    Please give rep too
     
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    alright well ill think about the changes thanks guys.... ill post in here again wen iv made some changes..
     
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    as for me too many google ads :(
     
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    #17
    Nice and simple.

    But I do have some suggestions:

    1. Change the Google Ads Text Link 428x15_5 background to "black, so it will blend more with your site. The font color could be blue.

    2. Add more content.
     
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    Not loading here!!! :(
     
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    0/10 defo MFA site

    Cant you even format the articles you got for free?
     
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    um, check this out:

    http://www.buildurbody.com/article.php/32/The last week before a show

    ALL the other articles either have not been uploaded or fixed thats the only article as of yet which is correct! im focusing on exams atm and after next week im going to put up all my articles again! i lost my MySQL database bcoz my host ran away! so dont chat crap, articles for free? i have 2 writers and i write myself dont talk about what u dont know about...either give me constructive criticism or shutup
     
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