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Discussion in 'Websites' started by elkiwi, Sep 7, 2005.

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    Not sure if anyone would have time for this or if this is the right place to post but...before I submit this article I would like some constructive criticism.

    I am not a writer and this article was written from bits and pieces around that I found on the subject.

    The power of the oceans
     
    elkiwi, Sep 7, 2005 IP
  2. sharpweb

    sharpweb Guest

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    I thought it was pretty good and had an interesting subject, but alas I'm not much of a writer myself so what do I know?
     
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    Looked pretty good to me...

    You might find this useful for the future though
     
    Doublespresso, Sep 7, 2005 IP
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    iskandar Well-Known Member

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    Sounds good. Just that sometime it appers as if there's a bit of cut-and-paste done on it
     
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  5. annew

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    Not bad at all...
     
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  6. elkiwi

    elkiwi Active Member

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    There was some definately cut and paste activity but I did re-write...just things that were too specialist for me.

    Thanks for pointing that out though.
     
    elkiwi, Sep 8, 2005 IP