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The Adult Toy Shoppe

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Stumpygrrl, Aug 1, 2005.

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    This is my online store. Any constructive critisism and comments is greatly appreciated. Note: you must be over 21 to view the website. There is NO porn on the website, it is an online store with adult toys and novelties.
    http://www.TheAdultToyShoppe.com

    If you decide to purchase something, write in the "special comments" section of the checkout page that you saw the link from the website review thread of digital point forums and I'll include a FREE bottle of personal lubricant with your order!
     
    Stumpygrrl, Aug 1, 2005 IP
  2. fryman

    fryman Kiss my rep

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    No comment... :rolleyes:
     
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  3. lorien1973

    lorien1973 Notable Member

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    i saw the dinky digger and that was plenty for me ;)
     
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  4. TommyD

    TommyD Peon

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    #4

    Amen To That!
     
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  5. voltaire

    voltaire Banned

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    #5
    it's fine! just a bit too crowded for me..and text not too readable.. spice it up a bit..
     
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  6. Stumpygrrl

    Stumpygrrl Active Member

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    Are you referring to the text on the buttons? While the website was in development, I thought that same thing but I did not think it made them illegible so I went ahead with the font anyway. I've heard that a few times already so on my next website, I will pick a different font or perhaps not use buttons at all. Thanks for your input!
    :)
     
    Stumpygrrl, Aug 2, 2005 IP
  7. ScottFish

    ScottFish Peon

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    If I were you, I'd ditch the buttons and just do a table that has each section as text, and then make the background of each cell, the color that you choose.

    This just looks more professional and this way you dont have to mess with ALT tags. - Plus your pages will load exponentially faster!

    Scott Fish
     
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    MELLA Peon

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    This isn't a diss...but I think it looks kinda unprofessional. Like..uhh...Just the kind of site that I get as pop up ad's. It's too busy, and crammed. Like a dictionary was sick all over it. I don't particularly like the buttons, or the fakeish blue colour or the layout or the text but apart from that, great.

    Obviously, it's still miles better than anything I could do.
     
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    MarketingPro Peon

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    #9
    So why do they call you "StumpyGrrl"?
     
    MarketingPro, Aug 2, 2005 IP
  10. Crazy_Rob

    Crazy_Rob I seen't it!

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    Good call MerketingPro! I was afraid to ask. :)
     
    Crazy_Rob, Aug 2, 2005 IP
  11. chachi

    chachi The other Jason

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    I agree with ditching the buttons. I think the buttons and the color for them is not working...too overpowering (no pun intended). You may just want to do some CSS text buttons instead.

    But, I have to say, there is something about saying "the Mystic Ram Strap On Harness" that makes me laugh. :)
     
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  12. Stumpygrrl

    Stumpygrrl Active Member

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    I came up with it by accident one day and it just stuck becuase it is easily recognized and slightly akward.:D
     
    Stumpygrrl, Aug 2, 2005 IP
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    The text is too inconsistent and busy. Something simpler. More space around the items as well, or perhaps some borders or something.
     
    mediaguru, Aug 2, 2005 IP