Critique my Marketing Web Site

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by objective, Feb 1, 2007.

  1. #1
    As objective as I can be for others it's hard to do so for myself. I would appreciate comments on my reasonably new web site - good or bad?
    Thanks you very much and regards.... Robert
    www.objective-marketing.com
     
    objective, Feb 1, 2007 IP
  2. The Special One

    The Special One Guest

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    Excellent content!

    I would add more pictures relevant to what you are taking about. What is the goal for this website?

    I see you got a blog there too!!

    You might want to get a banner for this site, overall content looks superb, you have worked hard.

    I would make the text stand out a bit more!
     
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  3. john269

    john269 Notable Member

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    Nicely designed with a good use of colors. I like it. It also has some nicely laid out content.
     
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  4. jrbiz

    jrbiz Acclaimed Member

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    I think that you have obviously worked hard on content. But I think that there is too much text (especially on the home page) and not enough graphics. Remember, you are pitching marketing services, so your customer base will be expecting to see high quality graphics design along with the good content. Rightly or wrongly, marketing is often identified with cool graphics designs by businesspeople who know little about marketing (your likely prospect base, of course.)
     
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  5. WillB

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    Definitely too much text. As a potential customer, I want to immediately
    see what services you offer, with visual clues to help lead me to where
    I want to go, and to inspire me with your creative wizardry.
     
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    Agreed with what's been said. Show me what you can do for me, then tell me what you can do for. Keep the homepage/entry pages shiny and make me click to learn about the deep.
     
    Swiftpage, Feb 1, 2007 IP