Contest $50 Logo Contest - Guaranteed Winner

Thanks for the feedback, revision.

 

actually, it IS a machine gun! ha!

now here is my revision.

 

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Just had a long conversation with the client and he hasn't been blown away by the submissions which is why the feedback has been slow. The original brief was for a strong font with an abstract design. Client does commercial cleaning and does not want pressure wash lances, domestic roofs or sparkles. He is looking for a more corporate logo and hopes that any further submissions do not contain word art type logos. He has given his responses below but hopes that you all take guidance from this response. More corporate style submissions are what is needed to win this comp, please get creative and lets get this competition closed out. He did like a combo of green and blue but is 100% NOT set on this so please make your efforts corporate with a good use of colour

#20 - Liking this logo. not exactly sure why but it does get my attention. to be critical maybe the pressure wash lance is too detailed which makes it really difficult to put on to clothing
#21 - much preferred effort but still something about it that i don’t like but not sure what it is maybe to straight/square
#22 - Good effort, but again too much small detail in the pressure lance which doesn’t allow it to be put onto clothing properly
#23 - Don’t like the logo, it looks like a plan view of a brain inside a lightbulb
#24 - Liking the revision and the use of equipment
#25 - Clever use of the equipment, don’t like the Lance upside down though
#26 - prefer the use of the lance and hose instead but still don’t like the centre design

Thanks for your efforts so far but not close to a winner.

 

Revised Corporate, clean and abstract. thanks!

 

New concept

 

Good day Contest Holder!

Here is my entry and a short explanation about my design.
The icon is a letter S with sparkles in swiping motion which represents the cleaning business.
Any feedback is appreciated.

Respectfully,
Faith

 

polished version

 

Here's a concept idea



Feedback Appreciated​

 

revised... please check thanks!

 

Modification
#20 - Liking this logo. not exactly sure why but it does get my attention. to be critical maybe the pressure wash lance is too detailed which makes it really difficult to put on to clothing