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Discussion in 'Websites' started by Patrick V.Fisher, Jun 24, 2018.

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    Hello Dear,
    Here is my website : http://www.pawnhost.com
    I really need you opinions and your reviews to develop my website and to make it better for users, thank you !
     
    Patrick V.Fisher, Jun 24, 2018 IP
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    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    Your first problem is the dreadful name. No matter which way you play it, being a "pawn" is not desirable. Then if you want to say the name out loud, omg, it's a complete No.

    Your contact page requires visitors to log in first. Not the way to handle sales enquiries.

    Your phone number appears to be American... isn't that a bit deceptive for a Moroccan company?

    I went to https://www.pawnhost.com/billing/clientarea.php and could get to announcements etc but couldn't get back to your home page.


    Edit: Previous review thread: https://forums.digitalpoint.com/threads/please-review-web-hosting-site.2787457/
     
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    sarahk, Jun 24, 2018 IP
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  3. Patrick V.Fisher

    Patrick V.Fisher Peon

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    Thank you so much for your valuable Review.
    You mentioned things that I had not noticed before.
    Really very valuable notes, thank you so much ! :)
     
    Patrick V.Fisher, Jun 25, 2018 IP
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    Actually, the name doesnt matter as much as you think. Elon Musk has a company called "Boring Company" which is worth about 113 million!

    I would think your economy vps plan is the plan you would want to promote most seeing as it is in the middle and slightly bigger in size compared to the other plans. So I would change that box to a bolder color along with "Most Popular" at the top.
    And add a little social proof at the bottom. Some testimonials of your hosting plan actually helping people. If you don't have any, give it out to some people for free so that they can use it and give you testimonials. Or just make fake ones if like. Trust me, just about everyone does.

    Lastly, include a falcon of your logo.
     
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    thank you so much for Your review ! i apperciate it :)
     
    Patrick V.Fisher, Jun 25, 2018 IP
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    No problem!
     
    Larry Thibodeaux, Jun 25, 2018 IP
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    But you didn't say "a company called the Boring Company is worth...", you tied it back to Elon Musk who has status.
     
    sarahk, Jun 25, 2018 IP
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    I said the company was worth 113 million. Look it up if you don't believe me.
     
    Larry Thibodeaux, Jun 25, 2018 IP
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    @Larry Thibodeaux Your language comprehension is limited. I'd heard of the company, I don't live under a rock. My point was that if I said my neighbour had a company with the same name you'd have yawned and moved on. Say the name in association with Elon Musk and you have people's attention.

    Now, I say the I use the services of the "boring company" in public people don't bat an eyelid, they might be curious but they aren't offended
    If I say I use the services of "pawn host" they think it's either porn (ick) or a pawn shop (ick) and I'll have some explaining to do.

    It might be that there are enough incel teenagers wanting websites who think the double entendre is hilarious, in which case it's all good. I haven't seen his business plan. If he's relying on more mainstream website owners he might want to consider a name change.
     
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