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Please criticise my blog for adsense approval

Discussion in 'Guidelines / Compliance' started by mi6hq, Aug 30, 2017.

  1. #1
    Hi friends,

    I have created one blog and willing to apply for Google Adsense. I wish you people criticise my blog and let me know the faults so I can recitfy mistakes and apply for google adsense.

    http://www.onlinebusinessphone.services/

    Regards

    MI6
     
    mi6hq, Aug 30, 2017 IP
  2. Spartan14

    Spartan14 Active Member

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    In my opinion its good but i think you should arange it a little more in page etc
     
    Spartan14, Aug 30, 2017 IP
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    Agent000 Prominent Member

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    MFA poorly written junk; won't be approved. As your use of the English language and grammar are not good enough, there is nothing you can do to fix it.
     
    Agent000, Aug 30, 2017 IP
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    dscurlock Prominent Member

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    I would get rid of the domain also, OnlineBusinessPhone.services;
    I would never take a domain like that serious enough to visit....
     
    dscurlock, Aug 30, 2017 IP
  5. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    When you called it a blog I expected it to be insider information from someone working in the business but on visiting it appeared to be a news site, though when I scrolled down it appeared to be a 101 site. Thoroughly confusing.

    For someone using a UK IP address the quality of the writing and proofing isn't good enough - did you use a spinner?
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    I'm going to agree with @Agent000 and @dscurlock and suggest that adsense aren't going to want to know. I'd also recommend rethinking the time and effort you put into the site. Create a business plan, work out what your goals are and how you're going to meet them. I don't think this site will be satisfying or profitable.
     
    sarahk, Aug 30, 2017 IP
  6. dscurlock

    dscurlock Prominent Member

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    overall, terrible site.

    some niches I would never get into:

    adsense
    news
    adult/porn
    forums
    classifieds
    gaming

    however, the last thing I would ever get into is random news...
    writing on random topics is very bad targetting, and thus, you
    would need 10 or even 20 fold the content compared to a niche site.

    • research your niche....
    • do keyword research...
    • use good design, responsive...
    • write good content, or hire someone...
    • look for authority backlinks...
    • repeat the process....
    Even with a niche site, it still can take as long
    as 12-24 months to get your site off the ground...
    (depends on niche, and if you have done everything right...)
     
    dscurlock, Aug 30, 2017 IP
  7. mi6hq

    mi6hq Member

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    Thanks for everyone suggestions. I used spinner for these articles. What about this blog www.onlinesmallbusinessloanss.com?

    I will try to fix all mentioned error.

    Regards

    MI6
     
    mi6hq, Aug 30, 2017 IP
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    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    FFS don't use spinners - I see you've gone to your regular IP. Don't pretend to be someone you're not. We will be way more forgiving about poor English when we know it's not your first language than when you make our you are from the UK.

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    That's appalling but the bigger problem is that they are wanna-be/me-too sites and you don't appear to have any expertise in your subject matter.

    Write a business plan, work out what you have going for you and play to your strengths.
     
    sarahk, Aug 30, 2017 IP
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  9. mi6hq

    mi6hq Member

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    After 20 days my Adsense account is approved with same blog. I did not change anything and as mentioned earlier I used spun articles and even did not post any new article after application. :)
     
    mi6hq, Sep 18, 2017 IP
  10. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    It'll be interesting to see if your account gets reviewed before the payout.
     
    sarahk, Sep 18, 2017 IP