Guys, I need your help! I will give rep to the first ten who reads and votes, be honest! Which sales page is the best (or least worst if you view them all as bad)? (I started a contest a while ago, needed a sales letter quick): ¤ Shalini ¤ Sacredhoops ¤ John Guanzon Voting ends 21 dec, at noon GMT. Users who vote must have been members at least 3 days (prevent cheating) and the above contestants may not vote. Thanx!
Thank you for taking your time, added some rep : P (if I am not mistaken you can give 10 rep maximum for a day, right?)
I definately like Shalini's version the best, however I also like johns because of the design elements. I think if you add a college focused design to shalini's it will give the best results. Good luck to you.
I preferred Johns. The others were too "formula" for me. However John's had typos so make sure you spell check before you use it.
Thanx for the advice. Of course, all of them are just basic and need editing, graphics, powerful headlines and some interpolating ^^ Will Add rep to those who answered
i read the first letter...the first block...and i did NOT know what is sold...or why. Those sales-letter (not yours, i mean in particular) pages REALLY turn me off a lot (i have seen too many of them)...and one would have to CATCH MY INTEREST in the first second i read them. It took longer than a second with your first letter...so i do NOT think it's a good letter to sell anyything. I got a short attention span..used to too much spam etc....and if you REALLY wanna bring over a message and sell a good product you have to be precise WHY and WHAT and HOW GREAT in the first fraction of a second someone comes along your page. My $0.2
eg..further below you SAY what ths book is about...but i didnt even get that far. You should defintly put that at the TOP....YOU are selling the XYZ great ebook which helps you with THIS, and THAT......and not half a page down.