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Help me out, chose the best sales page!!

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by cabdirazzaq, Dec 18, 2006.

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Who wrote the best?

  1. Sacredhoops

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  2. John Guanzon

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  3. Shalini

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  1. #1
    Guys, I need your help! I will give rep to the first ten who reads and votes, be honest!
    Which sales page is the best (or least worst if you view them all as bad)? (I started a contest a while ago, needed a sales letter quick):

    ¤ Shalini
    ¤ Sacredhoops
    ¤ John Guanzon

    Voting ends 21 dec, at noon GMT. Users who vote must have been members at least 3 days (prevent cheating) and the above contestants may not vote. Thanx!
     
    cabdirazzaq, Dec 18, 2006 IP
  2. FOX LORE

    FOX LORE Notable Member

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    #2
    My vote went to shalini....
     
    FOX LORE, Dec 18, 2006 IP
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  3. cabdirazzaq

    cabdirazzaq Banned

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    #3
    Gave you some rep ^^
    Have a nice day
     
    cabdirazzaq, Dec 18, 2006 IP
  4. devin

    devin Guest

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    #4
    shalini. tat one has a "buy me" proclamation.
     
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  5. cabdirazzaq

    cabdirazzaq Banned

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    #5
    Thank you for taking your time, added some rep : P (if I am not mistaken you can give 10 rep maximum for a day, right?)
     
    cabdirazzaq, Dec 18, 2006 IP
  6. bonkerbids

    bonkerbids Active Member

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    #6
    I definately like Shalini's version the best, however I also like johns because of the design elements. I think if you add a college focused design to shalini's it will give the best results. Good luck to you.
     
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  7. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    #7
    I preferred Johns. The others were too "formula" for me. However John's had typos so make sure you spell check before you use it.
     
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  8. KeywordsandCopy

    KeywordsandCopy Peon

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    #8
    I voted for John Guanzon...I liked the design and simplicity...but of course, that is just me...
     
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  9. cabdirazzaq

    cabdirazzaq Banned

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    #9
    Thanx for the advice. Of course, all of them are just basic and need editing, graphics, powerful headlines and some interpolating ^^

    Will Add rep to those who answered
     
    cabdirazzaq, Dec 18, 2006 IP
  10. Swiftpage

    Swiftpage Peon

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    #10
    John's was catchy, due to the graphics, but I think Shalini's was laid out better.
     
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    #11
    I prefer Shalini's also. flows nicely
     
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    Notting Notable Member

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    #12
    I voted for Shalini. John was a bit gimmicky but quite nice all the same.

    Cheers
    Notting
     
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    #13
    Voted for ya. Good luck.
     
    drig, Dec 18, 2006 IP
  14. GeorgR.

    GeorgR. Peon

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    #14
    i read the first letter...the first block...and i did NOT know what is sold...or why.

    Those sales-letter (not yours, i mean in particular) pages REALLY turn me off a lot (i have seen too many of them)...and one would have to CATCH MY INTEREST in the first second i read them.

    It took longer than a second with your first letter...so i do NOT think it's a good letter to sell anyything. I got a short attention span..used to too much spam etc....and if you REALLY wanna bring over a message and sell a good product you have to be precise WHY and WHAT and HOW GREAT in the first fraction of a second someone comes along your page.

    My $0.2
     
    GeorgR., Dec 18, 2006 IP
  15. GeorgR.

    GeorgR. Peon

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    #15
    eg..further below you SAY what ths book is about...but i didnt even get that far.

    You should defintly put that at the TOP....YOU are selling the XYZ great ebook which helps you with THIS, and THAT......and not half a page down.
     
    GeorgR., Dec 18, 2006 IP
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    #16
    Well, Shalini got me at the headline. But Johns web approach, ok. Sacredhoops was a mediocre.
     
    ancer, Dec 19, 2006 IP
  17. cabdirazzaq

    cabdirazzaq Banned

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    #17
    I hear by announce Shalini as the winner, Congrats!
     
    cabdirazzaq, Dec 21, 2006 IP