Contest 20$ Vintage Look T-shirt Contest - Aiming to end within 48hrs

Hello again talented people:

I need the following: a design for a t-shirt that needs to look vintage and a little more on the masculine side as it is for men only.

Name: Logo can be downloaded from here https://wetransfer.com/downloads/b3...065f574cd39c139bdccc8dcc20170711121236/c1d289

Tag line: Keep_On_Lifting (remove the underscores)
Additional words you can use: following the tagline or wherever you see fit you can also use the following: Old School Lifting League

Colours: please try and use no more than 2-3 colours. You can also use a single colour if you wish to.

VERY, VERY IMPORTANT: I need this to have a vintage look. Just below you can see something that I call vintage



NO PM entries please. Please post everything on the thread. Any questions please feel free to ask.

Winner gets $20 via paypal. I am hoping to end this contest within 48hrs

 

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CRH5: thanks for the entry but it is not what I am after. You are probably trying to think outside the box but I need to have the recognisable/original logo as part of the design

SGDESIGNS: very nice and suitable (vintage) looking design

 

Here's my entry. Hope you like it. Thank you

 

ngodz: thank you for the entry. It looks good, it is very creative, it is definitely vintage looking just like I asked, but I have a small problem with your design. Now don't get me wrong, I like it but I feel like it is a touch feminine looking and I need something a little more masculine.

 

It's ok. Thank you for feedback!

 

Thank you for your feedback. Here's my revision. Thanks.

 

Hi CH, please see attached my submission:
100% Vectors

 

Here with a mockup of the current design:

 

ngodz: thank you for the new design. It is very creative and it certainly looks more masculine now with the barbell but it seems to be a touch too much. Here's the strangest thing: of all the times people used dumbbells or barbells I never really liked them. I like this one you used very much but somehow I don't feel is the right combo simply because it looks too much. Sorry if I am confusing you.

itsBeau Design: thank you for entering this contest. I really like your design but in some strange way it makes me think of something more old western style rather than a vintage style. I still like it but can't shake off this strange feeling of old western style/look

getdomain4u: thank you for the entry. I like the colour combination you used. It certainly looks vintage which is great but I feel it looks a little feminine and I need a more masculine look

 

Hi CH thanks for the feedback.
I think that could be because of the colours I used.
I will tinker with this alittle and see if I can alter the overall look and feel.

 

Other version.

 

itsBeau Design: another possibility is that I am wrong and I somehow see it (wrongly) that way. So I am willing to accept that it could just be me

Athisa: I like it. It looks really, really good but there is only one problem: I cannot see my logo. And I feel like you have to be careful if you decide to submit another one that also has my logo because depending on how/where you place the logo may negatively impact an otherwise great design

ngodz: thank you. This looks good.

 

Hi CH see attached mockups of 2 other variations.
I didn't add the final touch just incase you did not like the overall design.

 

Will enter!

Please wait
Thanks