Contest $30 Logo Design and Redraw

I'm looking for a logo for my clothing brand.

Firstly I would like the logo below redrawn, I want it to be straight not at an angle and in black.

Secondly, I would like our name Urban Reality to fit into the logo, so my initial thoughts is to fit it in the space between the two dots. It needs to have an urban but professional feel to the writing.

Thirdly, I would like two copies. One being with the logo and urban reality included and the second with just the logo.

Two day contest, ends tomorrow night (Friday 18:00 GMT)

If you have any questions please contact me.

 

My try:

 

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Thank you everyone for taking the time to enter the contest. One design caught my eye and I have decided to stop the competition and award it to illidan_000.

Thank you again!

 

It is sad when things are solved in private and the other designers waste their time. I'm wondering if you like to work for free, cause I don't

 

Sorry I didn't have any idea that someone would send their entry via PM but they did. I'm happy to put their design up here so you can all see it?

However, it was a contest and someone who entered, won it. I really appreciate everyone who took the time to enter and who used their time to send an entry in.

Thank you again

 

I don't understand your analogy, so if a designer loses a particular contest and doesn't win, that means he worked for free and wasted his time? It doesn't make sense.

Thank you as well for picking me, files sent.


Winning entries were:

 

For a fair play you should not accept entries via pm, because a pm entry receive more information on the direction that it should go than an entry sent in thread, and it's not ok. This was a fix contest with the sketch made it can't be accused of copy, but for your information don't accept entry via pm, it's not ok for others. Best regards.

 

Payment received, thank you.