Contest $100 [48-Hours] New Logo Design Contest! Winner to be paid via PayPal

my second try

 

joining in a while... thanks for the invites

 

My entry for the contest.

 

Thanks for the invitation, here is my entry, I hope you'll like it.

 

@MrRooT - Thanks for the revisions. I love the way you are experimenting with different versions of the i - very creative concepts! I'm wondering if you can try a font that is a little more simple? We enjoy creative fonts but this looks too heavy and busy for what we are looking for.

@jreign - The way you are playing around with the i is really creative but might be a little busy. The font feels a little heavy. Maybe try something a little more delicate?

@Dreamer05 - Cool idea with the partial circle! My only concern is that it looks like a large C. This is a new look from what we've seen and we'd love to see some more options from you. We also really like the way you reduced the size of Naturals but stretched it out a bit. Nice balance!

I also really appreciate your including the logo on different backgrounds and I'd love to see how it would work color-wise on the product images we posted.

@Shankar Thakur - Thanks for your submissions! We prefer the font on the third one but I'm not sure about the lighter color of the word "Skin." We'd like the word TruSkin to really stand out when the logo is on a small bottle.

@Gorgon - Can we try the square version from your first design on the center bottle? Also, It would be interesting to see some definition of the logo. Maybe some horizontal swishes or lines before and after the word Naturals or Naturals in green? Just a thought.

 

Let me know what you think.

 

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@logoesdesign - We like the defined, clean & simple aspects of the design. Cool take on the leaf coming off the S but it seems a little distracting and almost out of place. Can you do something with less of the leaf and a more unique font? It would also be interesting to see variations with different color backgrounds.

@onlinedomainers - Really creative leaf design - but it's a little more feminine than we are looking for. We'd like to see a design that is primarily feminine but not to the point that it turns men away. We aren't crazy about the font either. We'd love to see another round from you!

@muddy786 - Thank you so much for including the multiple color variations on different backgrounds! It's extremely helpful to see how the design will look on various applications we will be using it for.

Feedback:
1. Not sure about the font. The word Naturals especially has more of a technology feel to it rather than a skincare brand. We're not totally opposed to it but we'd like to see some other variations.
2. We are changing our labels so don't pay too much attention to making the font compatible with what is on the current labels.
3. We'd like to see some more options for the illustration/icon. We are actually trying to move away from the "leaf lady" look.

 

It's getting awful late here so we are going to call it a night. Please keep your designs coming so we can get back to you with feedback in a few hours - first thing in the morning.

We are really excited about what we are seeing!

 

Here is with lines:

 

Another version:

 

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