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Looking for advise for my first Facebook ad

Discussion in 'Facebook' started by Taylor Florom, Oct 4, 2015.

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    I have been working on my website and business for a couple months now. Mostly I have been getting my curriculum set up and trying to get my branding straight.

    With only 65 followers (mostly family and friends) I think its time for me to give a Facebook Ad a try.

    I wanted to start out small, and do a 7 day, $5 per day ad that looks like this

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    It would then lead them to this landing page.

    http://www.taylorflorom.com/free-pregnancy-session/

    I'm looking for general advise on content and copy in the ad, and if there are any glaring issues with the landing page it reaches.

    Thanks in advance for all the help!
     
    Taylor Florom, Oct 4, 2015 IP
  2. Taylor Florom

    Taylor Florom Member

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    :)
    Thanks but I was hoping for a little more critical feedback on the design of the ad itself.
     
    Taylor Florom, Oct 4, 2015 IP
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    Zoti Media Group Notable Member

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    The ad looks great! Just you have to check it if there is more then 20% text on the image (facebook rules).
     
    Zoti Media Group, Oct 4, 2015 IP
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    glasseslit Greenhorn

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    Nice website! the picture is wonderful!
     
    glasseslit, Oct 9, 2015 IP
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    Hi Taylor,
    your ad looks nice.

    If you have further help about ads, you can contact me at fb.com/NAEl.t.Q

    I have been doing this for a very long time and i have big pages.
     
    NAElPal, Oct 20, 2015 IP
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    Taylor,
    The Ad looks good but I'd create a call-to-action within the Ad.

    About the landing page, I'd change a few things.
    I'd move the contact info/sign up box above the fold of your site. The infographic looks good but doesn't explain enough about the site for the amount of "above the fold" space it takes up. Really didn't understand what the sites purpose was until I got down to the last "red banner area" with the "get started" button is. That area explains the sites mission well.

    Make sure to use targeting with FB ads. I would only target females as males would probably be a waste of budget/clicks. Age, interests, etc.
    Let us know how the test goes.
     
    kjh-08, Oct 20, 2015 IP
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    Iris_bvcn Greenhorn

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    The big agency can be help you. You can lease an account's agency, it's will save money for you and bring more effective. You can control your campaign and your budget every day.
     
    Iris_bvcn, Oct 20, 2015 IP