Check out my latest poetry!

Discussion in 'General Chat' started by matafixer, Nov 12, 2014.

  1. #1
    Hello DP people!
    I wonder if anyone writes poetry here! I sure do!

    When a flower blossoms
    and the sweet nectar satisfies
    the belly of a bee
    the birds reply with a song of fragrance unheard
    when the clouds decide to make it puffy for the day
    I find out that my best friend is totally gay.



    What do you think guys?
     
    matafixer, Nov 12, 2014 IP
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    LOL. How about inserting "rainbow" somewhere there too.

    Oh, wait... by "gay" you mean your friend is totally happy. I see.
     
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    When a flower blossoms
    and the sweet nectar satisfies
    the belly of a bee
    the birds reply with a song of fragrance unheard
    when the sun paints the sky with a rainbow
    and the clouds decide to make it puffy for the day
    I find out that my best friend is totally gay.
     
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    matafixer Active Member

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    Thank you qwikad.com !!! You finally made me an "established member"! The goal of creating this thread has been reached! :)
     
    matafixer, Nov 12, 2014 IP