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Review my writing

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Helge Sverre, Aug 22, 2013.

  1. #1
    Hey, I would like to get my writing reviewed.

    My blog is MarketingGuard.com

    What i would like to get checked is
    • What could i improve in my writing style?
    • Is the content easy to read and understand?

    Thanks.
     
    Helge Sverre, Aug 22, 2013 IP
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    Roger Pelt Active Member

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    Hello Helge,

    You are fantastic writer. I like your writing skill.

    Best of Luck
     
    Roger Pelt, Aug 22, 2013 IP
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    Michael Leng Active Member

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    It's good articles. Site designate is very friendly to eyes.
    Thanks for sharing,
     
    Michael Leng, Aug 22, 2013 IP
  4. Helge Sverre

    Helge Sverre Prominent Member Affiliate Manager

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    #4

    Thanks guys, is there anything I can improve?
     
    Helge Sverre, Aug 22, 2013 IP
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    roset03 Greenhorn

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    Helge, I agree I think your writing style is great mate. Nice and simple with lots of discrete headings - and I like the look of your blog. I might have to dive in and give it a read, looks very interesting!
    Hope this helps? :)
     
    roset03, Aug 23, 2013 IP
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    HostGarou Active Member Affiliate Manager

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    I believe if you add more infographics and images to your blog, it will looks more professional, image tell a lot and can illustrate what you are talking about from the first look. Also try to add featured images to your blog post excerpts, give example, video, schema, hope this helps :)
     
    HostGarou, Aug 23, 2013 IP
  7. Helge Sverre

    Helge Sverre Prominent Member Affiliate Manager

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    Thanks I will look into getting some more images and infographics.
     
    Helge Sverre, Aug 23, 2013 IP
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    BoonPeng Greenhorn

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    To look as profesional as possible, make sure all "i"(as referring to your self ie:I) are capital, as I've noticed that some are lowercase.
     
    BoonPeng, Sep 3, 2013 IP
  9. Helge Sverre

    Helge Sverre Prominent Member Affiliate Manager

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    Yeah I try to fix that whenever I see them, Bad habits.
     
    Helge Sverre, Sep 3, 2013 IP
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    BoonPeng Greenhorn

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    When I need to write something big, like an article. I use MS Word or Google Drive. It seem's to auto correct those little things that you don't notice.
    It also points out any spelling mistakes, and corrects the obvious ones too.
     
    BoonPeng, Sep 3, 2013 IP
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    Stacy Crak Greenhorn

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    Wow, not only is your writing great the blog looks fantastic. Great job! Bookmarked it and will spend some time reading your reviews and tutorials :)
     
    Stacy Crak, Sep 12, 2013 IP
  12. Helge Sverre

    Helge Sverre Prominent Member Affiliate Manager

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    Thanks ^^
    English is not my first language, but I feel i write it better than Norwegian haha :p
    Thanks for bookmarking ^^
    There will be some scrapebox tutorial(How to use it PROPERLY) and a look on a completely new product(with a developer interview ;D ) soon!
     
    Helge Sverre, Sep 12, 2013 IP
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    Stacy Crak Greenhorn

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    Awesome can't wait!
     
    Stacy Crak, Sep 13, 2013 IP
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    If English isn't your first language then you must use a translator on your blog, like google translation or babelfish.
     
    tariq1654, Sep 13, 2013 IP
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    Helge Sverre Prominent Member Affiliate Manager

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    #15
    I write better English than most people, I don't need a translator. :p
     
    Helge Sverre, Sep 15, 2013 IP
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    VukasinI Well-Known Member

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    Hi Helge, I really love what you done on your site. I see your site is Internet Marketing related, same as mine. English also isn't my native language, so I have problems in writting sometimes. I will post a thread similar to yours, so people can tell me more about my writting skills. I think my writting skills are a lot worser than yours, but I will rather write my own content than copy others.
     
    VukasinI, Sep 16, 2013 IP
  17. Helge Sverre

    Helge Sverre Prominent Member Affiliate Manager

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    I've seen your blog around, Looks like it has some good content on it, not a fan of the theme though ^^
    Good luck with the thread :)
     
    Helge Sverre, Sep 16, 2013 IP
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    VukasinI Well-Known Member

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    Thanks. Theme is Twenty Thirteen, new Wordpress theme. Actually, I always purchase Premium Themes from Elegant Themes or Theme forest, but I made an exception this time. Focus of Twenty Thirteen theme should be on content I provide. That is the main reason why I use it. It looked quality to me on first sight so I decide to go for it. I hope I will hear from you more, you seem like inteligent and nice person.
     
    VukasinI, Sep 16, 2013 IP
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    Helge Sverre Prominent Member Affiliate Manager

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    Thanks :D
    Yeah Themeforest is pretty good, I've used it for a few sites, but somehow i always find a free one that I like and end up using that one instead. xD
    Gotta customize them a bit of course ^^

    Ya seem like you know a thing or two yourself, Will keep up to date with your blog.
     
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    Hello, I enjoy the topics on your blog very much. I am definitely going to keep reading, so far I have read the Wordpress post and started on the Raintracker review/tutorial. The flow of your writing seems very natural and easy to read. And your English is better than many people I know who have been writing/speaking it for their whole lives lol.

    Anyway, there were a few spelling typos here and there in the Raintracker post but I don't have much else to say because there isn't anything else wrong to be honest. Just one question, why don't you like the Yoast plugin for wordpress? Or maybe a better question is why is All in One SEO better? Thanks!
     
    minotechonline, Sep 18, 2013 IP
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