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Looking for some feedback on my new HTML5 Game

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by kushsolitary, Nov 28, 2012.

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    Hi, I recently created a new HTML5 game with custom sounds and graphics and I am looking for some feedback now. You can play the game here: http://khele.in/pappu-pakia/

    A little about the game:

    This HTML5 Game (Pappu Pakia) has been happily made for the Github Game Off 2012. Based on the compo's rules, the concepts that we tried to incorporate are fork, branch, push, pull, clone.

    You are pappu in the game, a little character. You need to click the mouse or tap (touch screen) to levitate else pappu will descend. If he hits the top or bottom boundaries that'll end the game.

    There will be some obstacles along the way like forks, branches and some enemies who are also known as "pakias". Hitting them will end the game. 3 types of pakias - sad (pull you), happy (push you), angry (kill you). Keep safe distance from them!

    There are some collectibles too! Coins for points (yellow for 50, pink for 100, red for 500, blue for 1000). Stars for invincibility for a short period. Berries spawning clones that'll destroy anything that comes in their way!

    Collisions are not super strict to make the gameplay a little less harder.

    No Libraries/Frameworks used. All Custom Code and Custom Physics.

    Thanks :)
     
    kushsolitary, Nov 28, 2012 IP
  2. Kausik4u

    Kausik4u Active Member

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    #2
    Not open at Firefox
     
    Kausik4u, Dec 3, 2012 IP
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    #3
    great job i like it so much.
     
    Jadoonanan, Dec 8, 2012 IP
  4. Nawshale

    Nawshale Active Member

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    #4
    hi.

    about the game. Its cool. I feel pity when the bird dies. :)
    Can you add some animations and sounds?
    Honestly, i feel bored in the game. Just like the game in my old phone. avoiding blocks only.
    But, you did a great job. Kids will love it.
     
    Nawshale, Dec 12, 2012 IP
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    jenyfarlopej Member

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    #5
    I played games on your site. Your site design and games both I like.
    Overall it's a great job.
     
    jenyfarlopej, Dec 13, 2012 IP
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    mayank2yk Member

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    i think pappu pass hogaya .... i played the game and like ur efforts
     
    mayank2yk, Jan 16, 2013 IP
  7. Moon Raja

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    #7
    Your games and design are so cool. I am very enjoy the games and your effort is apperciable.
     
    Moon Raja, Jan 16, 2013 IP
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    #8
    sorry but i dont like your games. but site is nice
     
    sandra_clair, Jan 17, 2013 IP
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    freshgreenlove Well-Known Member

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    #9
    simple games and nice graphic... keep creating games for we are :)
     
    freshgreenlove, Mar 4, 2013 IP
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    I liked it. But like others said, it got a little boring. If you could add some more animations, that would be great!
     
    RoguePyro, Mar 4, 2013 IP
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    Pretty cool game. Enjoyed playing it,

    BUT I think some more sound effects could make it better. Like when game ends from going off screen, or you get hit by one of the "pakias". The lack of animations as said above with the lack of some sound effects I think make it boring after a while.
     
    cbusiness, Mar 11, 2013 IP
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    solidstate Well-Known Member

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    #12
    I actually got addicted..after first play. excellent game.....
     
    solidstate, Mar 11, 2013 IP
  13. peoplewantingtobuy

    peoplewantingtobuy Banned

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    #13
    your web site bag round color amazing,banner also very attractive,
     
    peoplewantingtobuy, Mar 12, 2013 IP
  14. samaza

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    Yeah for me it has a 5 minute game play before it gets boring. How about a speed multiplier? If you can choose to go 1.5 speed or Double speed, and get double points for travelling equal distance if you do it double speed. You could also use -1.2 and -2 speed too. I hope you like the idea!
     
    samaza, Mar 13, 2013 IP
  15. lilypitter

    lilypitter Well-Known Member

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    #15
    Very beautiful game. Your site color combination is very fine. I think you have free upload this game by ANDROID.
     
    lilypitter, Aug 6, 2013 IP
  16. GMWD

    GMWD Peon

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    Not bad. I would work a little more on the graphics. Fine tune the colors a bit and you should be all set. Great idea and concept. Good luck.
     
    GMWD, Aug 6, 2013 IP
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    #17
    Dude... unrelated to the thread but the website in your sig is SWEET!!! I can definitely use this stuff in my profession and see myself coming back to your site pretty regularly!
     
    FlyinTurdNugget, Aug 12, 2013 IP
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    FlyinTurdNugget Active Member

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    This guy nailed it.
     
    FlyinTurdNugget, Aug 12, 2013 IP
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    #19
    Wow Great Game!

    Feedback:
    When I go full up, I die. You might want to add some ceiling to the level
     
    marht, Aug 12, 2013 IP
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    #20
    Same, very nice game it the beginning but then boring.
    also, I am affraid to broke my mouse with that click..

    But, still, nice graphic and game.. :)
     
    bluebenz, Aug 14, 2013 IP