Check out my new advert :D

Hello DP,

Would like some opinions on my awesome new advert!

https://www.facebook.com/video.php?v=634428243243787

Jordan

 

haha that was cute! two things I didn't like: 1. That voice was not pleasing to listen too
2. I personally wouldn't have listed the price of everything
other than that I like it!

 

When you say not pleasing, how did it make you feel?

 

Like I shouldn't take whatever was said serious, it sounds like someone playing around. It should be a clear voice that sounds a lot more conversational than rehearsed

 

dunno why the voice reminds me of southpark....

overall it is fairly well done! I know from personal experience, that hiring animators is never easy.

 

Really sorry but I have to say the voice doesn't do it for me either. As soon as the video starts it goes straight in to a high pitched shriek which made me cringe - the advert itself though is great so thumbs up

 

This ad keeps breaking up for me and I must say the voice doesn't sound good for me either. It may be a good idea but just not executed correctly.

 

I suggested to the OP a couple weeks ago that maybe updating his mascot would benefit his business in a long run. I just can't develop an instant trust with a business that has that type of a mascot. I wasn't and am not trying to be mean. Sometimes, other people can see things the way they actually are, simply because they are not attached to the service or product the way their owners are attached to it.

The thing with the current mascot is it dictates producing a commercial that at least 4 people in this thread said they don't really care about.

One time I heard a saying that goes something like that: The way you name your boat that's the way it will float. We really need to be careful what type of logos, mascots, names, promotions we use to get us to where we want to be. Those things can literally either make or break our businesses.