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Review - FacebookMonopoly.com

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Honolii, Feb 21, 2013.

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    Hey everybody I'm just looking for a few reviews for my newly launched product "Facebook Monopoly"

    Website: FacebookMonopoly.com

    Also, I'm giving away 10 Free Review copies of the actual system, first come first serve.

    Thanks a bunch everybody, and shout-out to all of my partners!
     
    Honolii, Feb 21, 2013 IP
  2. Honolii

    Honolii Member

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    Thank you! :) It's been a great launch! and such a long journey creating the product itself.....

    I've always been an Affiliate Marketer, I wanted to switch things up and be the Merchant for once :)
     
    Honolii, Feb 21, 2013 IP
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    indyonline Prominent Member

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    How do we get it?
     
    indyonline, Feb 21, 2013 IP
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    comanche82 Well-Known Member

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    Your site looks good. You should change the 600+ million to over 1 billion members. How do we get the free copy of your ebook?
     
    comanche82, Feb 21, 2013 IP
  5. Honolii

    Honolii Member

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    Hey everyone, If you would like to know how you can get a FREE copy or 1 month membership to FacebookMonopoly.com message me! :)
     
    Honolii, Feb 22, 2013 IP
  6. jacksarlo

    jacksarlo Well-Known Member

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    I don't like the two popups with video on them plus video did not work on my chrome (a plugin was required). You want ideally white background and black text that's most readable.

    Under top video I'd put one headline, not two and remove that horizontal bar... put headline in the table below (above dear fellow and in center maybe in red).

    Copy is too little for a $44 product. You need to work on your copywriting and ideally give them a money back guarantee. I suggest you start to learn copywriting.
     
    jacksarlo, Feb 22, 2013 IP
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    Nice and creative :) You should change the 600+ million to over 1 billion members. How do we get the free copy of your ebook? FacebookMonopoly.com
     
    alonzomlee, Mar 15, 2013 IP
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    coolrohit222002 Well-Known Member

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    I just wonder why is it no one ever bother to comment that your domain name: facebookmonopoly.com are in subject to the violation of trademark of domain name: facebook.com

    Trust me. Sooner or later your domain will be notified.
    I suggest you make use of another domain name just to be safe.
     
    coolrohit222002, Mar 15, 2013 IP
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    competent123 Notable Member

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    also, you have a LOT of space on right and left.

    your webpage looks like it has been made for a cinema screen ( i am on a 19 inch screen)

    reduce space on both sides a bit, and increase font size ( no need to bold it)
     
    competent123, Mar 16, 2013 IP