Are My This Articles Are Bad!!!

Hello DP Members,
Plse read my articles, are my this articles are bad,
Some Of The links:

1.) http://roulsubho.wordpress.com/2013/02/12/what-social-media-plugin-offer/
2.) http://roulsubho.wordpress.com/2013/02/12/making-social-media-sharing-simple/
3.) http://roulsubho.wordpress.com/2013/02/12/main-functions-of-wordpress-social-plugin/
4.) http://roulsubho.wordpress.com/2013/02/12/a-light-and-easy-social-plugin-for-your-site/
5.) http://roulsubho.wordpress.com/2013/02/12/the-different-advantages-of-paid-seo-plugin-software/
6.) http://roulsubho.wordpress.com/2013/02/12/getting-updates-on-seo-techniques/
7) http://roulsubho.wordpress.com/2013/02/12/about-seo-plugin-software/
8.) http://roulsubho.wordpress.com/2013/02/12/wordpress-and-seo-plugin/
9.) http://roulsubho.wordpress.com/2013...r-to-the-explosive-demand-of-online-shopping/
10.) http://roulsubho.wordpress.com/2013/02/12/free-vs-premium-adsense-plugin-debate/
11.) http://roulsubho.wordpress.com/2013...est-wordpress-adsense-plugins-for-your-needs/
12.) http://roulsubho.wordpress.com/2013...ugins-for-wordpress-ease-the-way-to-post-ads/
13.) http://roulsubho.wordpress.com/2013...the-main-sources-of-income-for-most-bloggers/

 

Are my articles bad is the proper way to say that.

ps. About the articles. They are not in proper english on the market not in the market. The are not in a market but on the open market. lol.

 

You cannot write English articles if you are not fluent in (written) English. Just like someone who is not fluent in written (choose your language) cannot write articles in that language. You should sick with your own native tongue, and you will probably be fine.

 

They are blatantly keyword optimized. Also, you should check your grammar in some parts of the articles.

 

All the keywords are given by client, and can u plse bold the lines which are wrong

 

I hate to tell you this, but pretty much the entire article is wrong on the links I checked. The grammar is incorrect and it is clear you do not speak English fluently enough to write in it. Technically, I can tell what you are trying to say. You just aren't saying it right.

 

I don't really agree. For example, I'm Swedish and I have written hundreds of articles that are up to 3000 words long in English. The difference is that I wrote them for people, not search engines like this guy seems to do. I wrote those articles to share something with the world and English was the best language I knew to do that in. Sure, I might not be overly fluent in written English, but as long as I have something interesting to say and I'm not only writing to rank a website in the search engines I think it's alright.

 

So can u please bold my mistakes and send me here

 

SEO optimized content for users is good. Give them what they are searching for but make it interesting. Don't diss o SEO optimized articles 2 much. I use keyword 1-3 times per article... Not stuffing or anything but just saying it helps me rank. Which gives me visitors to read my writing.

 

Yes, but you are clearly able to write English well, which makes all the difference in the world. This guy, unfortunately, cannot. When it is a matter of making occasional mistakes, there isn't much of an issue. Just an edit can take care of that. But these articles cannot be salvaged with a read through.

 

Client gave me 3 different keywords and he told to use them 2 times each

 

So can u plse bold my mistakes and send me.

 

Yes but your writing needs an editor. So it appears ok would only take an English speaking writer 5-10 minutes to fix up your articles but it would take major editing.

 

Keyword density is a normal part of blog writing, so adding in the keywords twice each are fine. But you have to do it in a natural, flowing way that spaces them out so they are not so noticeable. With the keyword optimization so blatant, added to the lack of proper grammar and syntax through the entirety of the posts, it doesn't work.

I am sorry, but these are not good articles. I am sure you would be fine in your own language, but you cannot just offer paid services for work in a tongue you are not fluent enough in to write properly.

 

There would be too many mistakes for me to send you. Literally the entire article at each link I checked was covered in errors, and so the whole thing would need to be rewritten.

 

Yes, of course you should think about making the articles search engine friendly, but you don't have to put your keywords everywhere like in these articles. Also, the <strong> tag should be used to make your message clearer, to catch the readers attention, not only to make your keywords stand out.

 

If u think my articles are bad, can u plse bold the mistakes and send me

 

Please see my response above. I have addressed several times why this wouldn't work.

 

Yes I agree with this!

 

so what you want is someone else to do all the work for you..how much are you paying?