Contest $250 Corporate Pack Contest - Contest Now Closed

Here are new fonts, if nothing of this isn't suitable, i agree to someone else assist.

 

When will be this contest ended? I want to submit an entry soon, but i need around 12-24h. Hope it will not be to late.

 

@frikusha
My apologies for the late reply. We have been having a severe weather event that has limited my ability to use the computer.
To me the font still doesn't look right but the top version is probably the best. Can you try creating a business card with the logo on it I can see how it looks?

 

I am thinking about extending the contest for another 5 days to give everyone a bit more time. Out of respect for everyone that has participated so far I would like to hear any objections first before changing the finish date.

 

Revision:

 

@coolwanz
I am really liking your design. I hope you don't mind, but I made an edit on your design to show you what I meant about flipping the graphic.
I am interested to hear your thoughts. If you are happy with the change, can you please start working on a business card and letterhead?

 

BC:

 

Business Card Design:

 

Here is my entry:

 

And another one:


Feedback appreciated.

 

Will enter soon, please extend it for few hours

 

@frikusha
I really like the design on the black background for the business card. Can you please prepare a letterhead as well? The letterhead will need to be on a light background.

@coolwanz
Your design is very clean and professional. Can you please prepare a letterhead as well?

@bizarotrips
The logos you have presented are very good however I find them a bit too bold and "aggressive" for image we are trying to present to our clients. If you can soften them somehow I think they would work better. The first two logos are softer than the third logo however I am not a fan of the font used for the MPM. Maybe try adding some curves or use a slightly different font on the third logo would be enough.

 

Hello,

here is my try, I tried to make it artistic. I hope you like it, feedback is appreciated. Will start working on business card and letterhead if you like the logo design, otherwise I'll think of something else

Regards,

Bucko.

 

Hi,

 

BC...

 

My try feedback please

if you choose my design i send the business card design

 

Thank you everyone who has submitted an entry. There have been some fantastic designs so far. I know this is going to be a hard choice to make when the time comes to choose a winner.

@Bucko
I like the font you have used and the spacings, but I am not a fan of the graphic. Mixing the colours like that is fine however I think the brush strokes makes it look a bit untidy.

@frikusha
I like how you are trying to tie everything together. The white space on the business card doesn't look quite right. Can you move the blue vertical line to the right (about 2/3 across) and then fill the white space with the same blue so it matches the blue pattern on the letterhead? No need for the additional graphic as you have the logo on the card twice already. The logo on the letterhead is taking up a lot of space. It will need to be smaller or relocated up into the blue header.

@Mr. Nag
I Like your logo design and both of the business cards. If I had to choose one I would say go with the top one. Can you please prepare a letterhead as well?

@Agent-X
I like that it is simple but to me the graphic looks like a flower

 

thanks for feedback, revision:

 

@frikusha
Can you do the business card like the bottom version but with the black line through it like the top version? blend the two versions together if you know what I mean.