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My New Business Website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by rain21, Jan 25, 2013.

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    This is my new business website. How is it ?
    Soon going to add few more options for it. What do you think about the website ?

    Enter Hilmia.com
     
    rain21, Jan 25, 2013 IP
  2. markpole$

    markpole$ Banned

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    It's good and you have indeed done a good work. I like it but add more information about the gem.

    Good job mate...
     
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  3. Mr.Coe

    Mr.Coe Greenhorn

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    #3
    I like the slideder it really pop out to me. But I don't like the background, I think you should change it to a shade of blue. Also I think you should switch the position of your page tabs.
    Home | About | FAQ | News | Contact
    Besides that everything looks professional to me :)

    Ps. You should think about changing your email to, support/contact @ hilmia.com
     
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  4. nmridul

    nmridul Member

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    #4
    Nice site.
    - Could change the background to something "shiny" (Something like what you have here - http://www.hilmia.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/12/Emerald.png)
    - Missing Twitter.
    - Could move the images (at top right on header now) to below the main menu (Home about etc). Or it could be made vertical or even below the slide show.

    Other than that the design looks good.

    One another suggestion is to have the phone numbers in (country code) phone format if you are targetting international customers also.
     
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  5. rain21

    rain21 Active Member

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    thanks. Yes, I'm going to add stock page to it soon with information about gemstones.


    thanks, I also think the menu order is better as you said, so I changed it. Email address as well. Thanks for your valuable review. It helped a lot.

    thanks, this business targets international clients only. I'm searching for a good looking background, going to change it when I find one. :D
     
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    rain21, Jan 25, 2013 IP
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    AON21 Active Member

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    Honestly, the site feels like a cookie cutter template from the 1990s with a header image that I can't click on - I automatically thought they were navigation buttons and the images stood out more than the real nav menu.

    Most importantly, get a copywriter in - today... now. The English typos and gramatical errors really stand out to a native English speaker and can be rectified relatively painlessly if you get someone to edit your content.

    Hope this helps!

    good luck
     
    AON21, Jan 26, 2013 IP
  7. rain21

    rain21 Active Member

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    thanks. I will find someone to proof read the English content in the site.
    :D
     
    rain21, Jan 26, 2013 IP
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    Overall, the site looks okay. I see you have a very challenging slogan, "Feel the difference". But the size of the font is so small that it really does look timid to me. How about making it real big, so that we can really FEEL the difference? Brush Script Std is a nice font, with its bold, sweeping strokes but then again, you may have your personal preferences.
     
    Poon Poi Ming, Jan 27, 2013 IP
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    FCM Well-Known Member

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    My biggest thing would be to remove the stripped background and go with a solid color or a vertical gradient. Other than that looks good - keep up the good work.
     
    FCM, Jan 27, 2013 IP
  10. rain21

    rain21 Active Member

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    thanks :D
    all suggestions are very valuable and I'm making some updates as suitable.
     
    rain21, Jan 27, 2013 IP
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    Perfect, but surely apply some suggestions that was given to you
     
    forumkk, Feb 5, 2013 IP
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    #12
    deny directory listing of your site's root folder
     
    kreed, Feb 6, 2013 IP
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    Looks nice, only i would change the background of the footer. Its a little to much i think..
     
    darkvisje, Feb 6, 2013 IP
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    nice structure of the site i am looking for that.....
    keep it up!!!
     
    johntyler1228, Feb 6, 2013 IP
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    #15
    its a good way to advertised your business
     
    George 12, Feb 7, 2013 IP