Darth Vader video I created , what do you think?

Hi , I'm still new to this graphic design world and I've always had passion to express my ideas so I started to learn how to use graphic design software like 3d max , photoshop , Edius , and in this topic I did want to ask you about my work ( I'm already in member in other design forum but I did want to know the opinion of a larger audience) so after watching this I will be waiting what you are going to say
<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: arial, sans-serif; white-space: nowrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">[video=youtube;r-60v_VXufM]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r-60v_VXufM&amp;feature=plcp[/video]

 

Hi bado,
the long text is a little bit too fast. maybe split it into two paragraphs with bigger letter? don't know. but music is cool and content is funny.

 

thanks man

 

This isnt a big deal, but its something i noticed. In section "Four" you loop video, probably to fit with the duration of the text. Maybe add a longer clip?

 

thanks man I will try

 

This is funny ...I like it....but can you reduce the text or slow down the speed....best luck..

 

I think its to many text.