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Discussion in 'Websites' started by Make a perfect site, Sep 12, 2011.

  1. #1
    Hi all,

    I am developing my new site. I don't want all users to see the dev. secrets, so I created a redirected page (landing page).
    On that page people can sign up for a notification. (It will notify them when the site is ready)

    OK the site is: http://www.chilledlime.com

    What is your opinion? How could I improve it? How could I get more people to sign up? :)

    Thanks in advance.

    Best Regards,
    Akos
     
    Make a perfect site, Sep 12, 2011 IP
  2. joekyut

    joekyut Greenhorn

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    #2
    Is your emphasis on registering e-mails or on what?
     
    joekyut, Sep 12, 2011 IP
  3. Black Dragon

    Black Dragon Member

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    #3
    You may want to make the intro a little more enticing, while it does leave you wondering and make you want to register, for some it may not be enough information. Some teasers may do the trick.
     
    Black Dragon, Sep 12, 2011 IP
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    Tina Nuo Peon

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    #4
    nice, clean and professional. I like it! Good work.
     
    Tina Nuo, Sep 12, 2011 IP
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    #5
    It's going to be really tough to get any signups imo if you can't give any more details? Will visitors have any better of an idea than the info presented here? Surely you can say a little more about how signing up will benefit them without divulging any secrets. That said, a background image, more graphical content and colors would definitely improve things.
     
    ajwalsh, Sep 12, 2011 IP
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    icmps Peon

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    #6
    I think this might be a nice start. Like the other guys said, it seems to lack content or teasers that will provoke visitors to signup to be notified of updates. Not only that, but nowadays, people are more aware of the various farming techniques that have been used (usually by spammers) and may be less inclined to signup especially if you don't give much in the way of details for what they are signing up for -- it just raises suspicions.

    So, think about what you can do to add some spark that loads quickly, captures the users attention, and easily directs them to what you want them to do (sign up). Sometimes, it helps to break it down to steps (1. sign up, 2. get email, 3. $$$$) or use directional guides (like arrows) to direct users in an aesthetically pleasing way.

    Good luck!
     
    icmps, Sep 13, 2011 IP
  7. Make a perfect site

    Make a perfect site Well-Known Member

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    #7
    Thanks for the tips. Yes I know that I need to add more info to get more people to sign up. I will do that.
    The arrows are a good idea too.

    Thanks again :)
     
    Make a perfect site, Sep 14, 2011 IP
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    #8
    If you want the sign up page to get more registrations use a light theme like facebook and twitter.

    Also, what is the site about, if I am gonna subscribe to something I want to know what its about.
     
    tupacmo, Sep 14, 2011 IP
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    chtdatweb Well-Known Member

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    #9
    By the way you have spelt intelligent wrong, your missing an L.
     
    chtdatweb, Sep 14, 2011 IP
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    Make a perfect site Well-Known Member

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    #10
    You don't understand my question!
    My site is a new startup. This means that it is a totally new website. In my case it is in private BETA version.
    People can sign up to get a notification when the site is ready.
     
    Make a perfect site, Sep 15, 2011 IP
  11. Make a perfect site

    Make a perfect site Well-Known Member

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    Thanks, I'll fix that typo
     
    Make a perfect site, Sep 15, 2011 IP
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    Irfi0009 Banned

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    #12
    nice work .good idea on it .good luck
     
    Irfi0009, Sep 15, 2011 IP
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    prince786 Well-Known Member

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    #13
    the landing page is cool.......
     
    prince786, Sep 15, 2011 IP
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    #14
    Try offering people something like an e-book. This isn't so much a landing page as it is an opt-in page. Why should I sign up? What exactly are you offering that would make people want to sign up? Think about that, and you'll get more members.
     
    gauvion, Sep 15, 2011 IP
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    #15
    I think it looks good.
     
    freyasdaddy, Sep 15, 2011 IP
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    AzumaNew Greenhorn

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    Hi, i think you need to make some attractive page mate. It's for make new user comfortable. However, look professional. Good job. :)
     
    AzumaNew, Sep 16, 2011 IP
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    Make a perfect site Well-Known Member

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    Hi, Thanks for your feedback. I really appreciate it. I will try to make the page a more attractive and more graphical. :)
     
    Make a perfect site, Sep 16, 2011 IP
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    #18
    Site looks good...profesional....but i think you should use more graphics on page
     
    aliraza9, Sep 16, 2011 IP
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    Make a perfect site Well-Known Member

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    OK thanks... I think some graphical arrows will do the trick :)
     
    Make a perfect site, Sep 16, 2011 IP
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    #20
    The landing page looks neat!
     
    Moctezuma, Sep 19, 2011 IP