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Please review my new iPhone related website.

Discussion in 'Websites' started by panarasgr, Apr 30, 2011.

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    Hello,

    I would like you to review my website : http://www.iphone-os.com
    It is iphone and ipad related with news jailbreaks and all the stuff an iphone or ipad user needs.

    I worked very hard on this project as it is my first time i am creating a website.
    I would be very pleased if you could give me some advice about the design , what should i do to make it look a bit more shiny .

    The content in most of the cases is re-written by me , so i can't say it is unique as English is not my native language and i am not a professional writer . Google can obviously understand that.

    Also if there is anything i could do to make my site operate better in search engines , it would be great if you could guide me through .

    Thanks for your time.
     
    panarasgr, Apr 30, 2011 IP
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    a++ Well-Known Member

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    #2
    You have a very nice domain and your wordpress theme also very nice.
     
    a++, Apr 30, 2011 IP
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    #3
    Ow. It is good design. The only thing is download speed is a little slow. USA
     
    antizoo, May 1, 2011 IP
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    panarasgr Well-Known Member

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    Truth is i am not very pleased with the godaddy services . No offence mr.GoDaddy. :confused:
     
    panarasgr, May 2, 2011 IP
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    #5
    nice, good design, but page is more lengthy.
     
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    #6
    I like the layout, color is fitting, and overall looks good. The front page is too long though, consider breaking it up into more pages. That is probably just a simple setting change in your wordpress admin area. Good luck.
     
    ohmer, May 2, 2011 IP
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    mrmj.v2world Peon

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    #7
    Take more time to loading. But I like your domain, simple and easy to put in my brain. :)
     
    mrmj.v2world, May 2, 2011 IP
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    You have a good domain name. Informative content and nice design.
     
    shreky, May 2, 2011 IP
  9. panarasgr

    panarasgr Well-Known Member

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    Thank you all for your replies . Do you think that this site has some potential? I am worried cause there is a huge competition with the keywords i have selected.
     
    panarasgr, May 4, 2011 IP
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    The site is easy to navigate and the content is all very relevant.

    Keep up the good work and ensure plentiful fresh content is added on a regular basis.
     
    lightup, May 4, 2011 IP
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    #11
    Pretty nice design.
    Displaying inappropriate ads though. Get rid of them through your AdSense account’s “Allow and Block ads” tab.
     
    raz, May 4, 2011 IP
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    #12
    Excellent work-colourful and helpful too!
     
    poptylal, May 5, 2011 IP
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    #13
    Nice blog and wordpress theme.
    if possible, add Breadcrumbs navigation to your posting pages.
     
    milanseo, May 5, 2011 IP
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    Design is ok, there is text that appears hidden behind your logo, not sure what it is.

    Curious as to why there is a Nokia article though?
     
    JPMiddleton, May 5, 2011 IP
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    i think a good,if not boring eye
     
    jeefry93, May 5, 2011 IP
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    Very Good, Informative content, good domain names, nice content.
    Your revenue gone a big. I am sure. Keep it up.
     
    prclicks, May 5, 2011 IP
  17. panarasgr

    panarasgr Well-Known Member

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    Not really sure what you are talking about . I looked for it everywhere but i couldn't specify any keywords for it .
    I could use a hand here.
     
    panarasgr, May 5, 2011 IP
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    I'm not sure here either, I can't see anything, sorry.
     
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    nice theme!!!
     
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    #20
    Congratulations on a great site! My suggestions are for your header.
    1. Your iPhone OS text in light blue and red, the 3rd line of text from the top of the main page, needs to go up to the top of the page, exactly the same distance from the left edge of the page where it is now, and replace the first line of text, "iPhone Operating System".
    2. Underneath the new 1st line of text, "iPhone OS", with the same left side indentation, is the second line of text. This should read, "iPhone & iPad News, Wallpapers, Themes and Jailbreak Info"
    3. Underneath the new 2nd line of text shoud be the 3rd line of text which should read, "Everything for the iPhone Operating System!"

    There you have it. A redesigned, much simpler and more effective header. The rest of your site is great!
     
    webjeber, May 10, 2011 IP