Feedback on my clickbank landing page please - my first product on the marketplace

Hi guys,

Am looking for some feedback on a product I've listed on Clickbank a few weeks ago.
It is a Cristiano Ronaldo workout program. So far I've only made about 1 sale, I was looking at my stats and I've had over 700 hop clicks... so I'm guessing thats telling me that my landing page might suck?

The product is listed here: http://www.clickbank.com/mkplSearchResult.htm?includeKeywords=ronaldo

I'm also wondering if the price is far too low. The ebook is actually pretty good, and has 37 pages of advice. So I'm thinking that maybe $9.99 is actually too low. I thought I'd get lots of sales as the product is cheap, but maybe people think its too cheap and therefore can't contain good advice?

Would love any feedback on the landing page.


Thanks!

 

Anybody able to give some feedback on the landing page? Would really appreciate it...

 

Yeah, 1 sale in 700 sucks.

You only give 25% commission which might turn off a lot of affiliates. However, your main problem seems to be conversions.

Your copy says "If we had to give a timeframe, you should START TO SEE RESULTS FROM ABOUT 3 MONTHS onwards - and you should be able to GET A BODY LIKE CRISTIANO RONALDO'S BY 12 MONTHS."

This is probably way too long for most people, who want it fast. I think they at least want to start seeing results way faster.

If I were you, I'd hire a real copywriter (there are good ones for $300 or so). Good luck

 

Or it either the one who is sending you traffic is not targetted.
I see alot of these lately also on my stats

 

I do not see how this landing page will work...

Plus most of your potential customers in USA probably do not even know who Ronaldo is...soccer is not that popular there...

 

Well i have to agree.

You are aiming US with Ronaldo it's not good strategy.

First of all 25% is nothing and on top of the all that's only 2$ Nobody is going to work their ass off for 2$!

Try and make some workout ebook about some top NFL Player make the bigger price and at least 50%

Secondly, you have to make that landing page a lot better.

Look on the google some good WP LP and some free Sales letter examples and then just change the words.

SXI

 

Thanks for the help guys. So you're basically saying my landing page isn't good enough - that the text copy needs improving. Also that I should up the price of the product, and also up the percentage that I will be giving away?

When you say I'm flogging a product in a market that won't understand the product (that USA don't know Ronaldo), this may well be true, but surely clickbank is also quite big in Europe? Or is it mainly just the USA?


Thanks again for all the advice, if anyone has any other suggestions then I'd love to hear them.

 

good feedback for all

 

Sorry but what did you mean by this?

If anyone else is able to answer my question in the previous post, or to review my clickbank product/landing page, I'd be much appreciative.

Thanks

 

At a minimum you need to double your price. and your affiliate payouts.
You need to redesign your landing page as it looks too hurried. Play around with some fonts. Get a better call to action and change the background colours. I don't agree with the Ronaldo comment that's ok he's well known enough worldwide.