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Please Help: Website Critique Needed

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by Jamaul Finley, Jan 31, 2011.

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    Hi everyone.

    I just made a new Lead capture page and I need a little feedback. Please do not opt-in because the site does not go anywhere.

    My question:
    If you were this customer would you opt-in to the site.

    Here's the link:
    http://mlmleverageblueprint.com/?preview=true&preview_id=690&preview_nonce=27cb998f75

    Background Information

    Customer: Network Marketer using Online Marketing and Attraction Marketing Systems to make money.

    Problem: Systems aren't working. Cant find leads, Making little or no money.

    Emotions Customer feel lost, duped at times but still eager and willing to learn. Been lied to and feel guilty for "falling for another one"
     
    Jamaul Finley, Jan 31, 2011 IP
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    dorothydot Peon

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    Well, I clicked your link and it told me I'm not authorized to view WordPress drafts.

    That most certainly does not make me want to jump in and sign up for anything, lol!
    Dot
     
    dorothydot, Feb 1, 2011 IP
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    its the same here.. cant check anything at all LoL
     
    fyerflyez, Feb 4, 2011 IP
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    You need to fix it first.
     
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    omarabid Well-Known Member

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