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Discussion in 'Websites' started by bizjam55, Aug 24, 2010.

  1. #1
    Please check out my site, www.30SecondVideo.com

    What do you think? Would you buy if you were looking
    to get an online video created?

    I take all constructive criticism, thanks :)
     
    bizjam55, Aug 24, 2010 IP
  2. Atol

    Atol Member

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    Hi, i think price to high
    For example entertainment video can do ANY freelancer who now that is AMV )
     
    Atol, Aug 25, 2010 IP
  3. moodey-aimee

    moodey-aimee Guest

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    #3
    the layout looks ok
     
    moodey-aimee, Aug 25, 2010 IP
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    I think the content is kinda cluttered and you need some sort of logo. Good Luck!.
     
    ClixDistrict, Aug 25, 2010 IP
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    Great website What I would do is clean it up a bit , adding a logo is key to a website also, sample page takes time to load I find, other than that it looks good if you need a logo I can creat one for you let me know
     
    buysell514, Aug 25, 2010 IP
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    jbliss24 Peon

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    I agree with buysell514. You have a nice look/feel to the site but it definitely lacks a new logo.
     
    jbliss24, Aug 25, 2010 IP
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    #7
    Two thoughts.

    First I would have the video auto start when someone comes to the site. It is your best chance to make a sales pitch - so make it!

    Second, you are telling me that you will make a high end video, but this doesn't look like a high end video!!! If you won't make a high end video for yourself why would anyone believe you would make a high end video for them?
     
    cougar206, Aug 25, 2010 IP
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    shopliine123 Peon

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    I think it look to busy to get first look and video must be better, but it is good start keep going
     
    Last edited: Aug 26, 2010
    shopliine123, Aug 26, 2010 IP
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    keith115 Active Member

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    Hi bizjam55 i would say price is just a little to high unless the service really is high end, looks a little to much for front page and video probably doesn't do your service the best start.
     
    keith115, Aug 26, 2010 IP
  10. bizjam55

    bizjam55 Well-Known Member

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    #10
    thanks for your comments, much appreciated.
    what do you think is a "better" price? what would you be willing to pay
    for a custom 30 second web commercial?
     
    bizjam55, Aug 26, 2010 IP
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  12. MickJagger

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    #12
    It looks like a scam site...I'd definitely recommend a more friendly/inviting theme.
     
    MickJagger, Aug 26, 2010 IP
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    bizjam55 Well-Known Member

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    mickjagger, what about it looks like a scam?
    its all legit! :)
     
    bizjam55, Aug 29, 2010 IP
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    I think because it looks a little budget and basic (the menu being flat black, fairly basic site, standard fonts etc) it lowers the effect of the overall quality of the site and makes you question its content and genuine nature, i think thats what mick was aiming at, was certainly what i felt on arrival.
     
    ptholt, Aug 30, 2010 IP
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    I agree... you're offering video creativity but there's nothing "creative" about the site itself... definitely mixed messages. That being said, i like the premise and if you can really deliver in 48 hours something that isn't completely canned then rock on!
     
    kjohnson94, Aug 30, 2010 IP
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    ecnalubmA Peon

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    #16
    thats good i like..
     
    ecnalubmA, Aug 30, 2010 IP
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    Greetings, I visited your site, and it is surely good enough to get the job done. I have seen others of less quality that are raking in a few decent sales.

    Anyway, I do have one comment that might help...

    Although this is not etched in stone, you are presenting yourself as a supplier or provider of VIDEO products or production services, yet, in my opinion, the actual HD quality or color resolution of the video appearing on your home page seems just a little bit "dark" or lacking that clear color excitement of high quality HD videos.

    Anyway, it is not me, but your target audiencde that matters. Just be sure it is as clear as, or clearer than, your direct competitor sites.

    Also, when you find need for content production, creation, or transforming into additional articles, blog material... and even pre-spun-ready format... just give me a shout. I would be glad to assist you.

    Until next time...

    Ken G. Dockins

    (P.S.) By the way, you can take a look at one of my extra" sites, MakingMoneyPossible.Info, which may appear here for sale in near future.
     
    KenDockins, Aug 30, 2010 IP
  18. theurbantwist

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    I agree! And also you really should invest in a logo to make your page pop, because I was expecting your site to be exciting based on your idea but it's too bland. I do like your concept but as a film professional myself and like a few others have said, your vids don't look high end and I will start working on the vids above and beyond anything else on your site since the vids are ultimately the product that you are pushing.
     
    theurbantwist, Aug 30, 2010 IP
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    theurbantwist Well-Known Member

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    I don't think it's a scam site, but I kind of see his point. Your site does not give off a welcome type vibe. It just doesn't look professional. If I were shopping for a 30 second video, I'd be a little wary of buying from you...I'm just being honest. Don't mean to sound rude or anything like that. I'm just saying that I see his point in saying that your site looks a little scammy.
     
    theurbantwist, Aug 30, 2010 IP
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    Yes, i think you need more simple welcome page
     
    anindito, Aug 30, 2010 IP