Hi.. Im working on my website for a long time and Im so new at this.. if you have any advises for my website would you write me.. I need opinions.. its so close to launch.. thank you! website -------------> http://www.becomeagirlmagnet.com Rick Cassidy
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You need also wider layout...so you can spread the text as well. This way it is hard to read. Also tooooo much white space and new lines. Also you can add some colors, this way is toooo black and white.
$149 down to $39.95 is not a 90% discount. It's a 74% discount. I am also seeing lots of layout issues... pictures are over the top of text and so on. Make sure you've checked your website in all the major browsers: Internet Explorer 7 and 8, Firefox, Chrome, and Opera. All of them handle layout differently. Your site may look amazing in one browser, and terrible in another.
Some of your boarders don't fit very nicely in my browser (chrome). A lot of your pictures are just slapped on anywhere I don't really like the feel of them. I don't think any of your links work either, like add to cart, affiliates, home... Lots of work to do but keep up the effort!
Scrap the huge sales page and let your visitors land on a lead capture page that offers a free report or free weekly get-a-girl tips. Send them one tip weekly along with a reminder about your full product.
Im working on my website still and when I fix the problem in one browser at the other browser it looks wrong again.. how can I fix that problem?
It might just be a problem with the website builder you're using. If you can edit the HTML directly you might have a better chance of fixing it.
you price is at 39,95...not $39.95. your layout is too narrow and gives me a headache to read. maybe add a background to break up all the white. white space is good but not 98% of the page.
You need to re-work on the site. If you have outsourced it, then screw him and get the best work done.
Honestly speaking the site is good , simple and effective but there are no graphics which catch the eyes of the visitor. Also include some good looking images to attract more attention.
The site need a lot of work.. Most of the pictures are falling of the page. I would recommend that you at least invest in a good graphic design to bring off the page especially for that niche.