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Need Advice, Review for Logo ' GEOSPHERE '

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by metz_wasil, Apr 28, 2010.

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    * Image in attachement *



    Hi world ,
    This my design logo. this logo dedicated for a geodetic and geomatics magazine. its about earth, orbital, geoid, and positioning. I need your comment about this. Your comments will be very helpful.
    Thank you world. Keep design :)
     

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    finally, image can be attached
     
    metz_wasil, Apr 28, 2010 IP
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    dhanjit Active Member

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    The image should be more closer. And texh should move round.
     
    dhanjit, Apr 29, 2010 IP
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    #5
    Hi,
    As a designer I think all of the items which are applied , are really in the correct form but as DHANJIT said the image should be more closer.
    Best wishes
     
    Mona Jazini, Apr 29, 2010 IP
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    I'm not sure the logo on the left will come out so well when the whole image is smaller?
     
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    #7
    I think that the colors and the font are working really nice together.
    Like the others said, try and move the image closer to the text.

    However, like Gaz7 said it is hard to see the icon when the logo is small. Maybe try simplifying it but keeping the same idea. For example, make the diamond/ triangle shapes bigger inside the circle and use less of them... there are now like 30 small shapes, try it with 10 bigger ones...
     
    MmmDesign, Apr 29, 2010 IP
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    PARAN0ID ANDR0ID Peon

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    Maybe move the text a bit closer to the inner circle but other than that, it's perfectly original (imo).
     
    PARAN0ID ANDR0ID, Apr 29, 2010 IP
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    mm....so, what your suggest gaz
     
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    mm.... thanks guys for helpfully reply, as your idea make a big triangle inside logo on the left and image closer may have a better look, i'll try costumize that. thanks PARANOID, Mmdesign, Mona, dhanjit and gaz. *may i look your design guys?*

    any idea then ?
     
    metz_wasil, Apr 29, 2010 IP
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    I like this design. I agree with the other peeps who had concerns about the reproduction value as this gets smaller and moving the type in closer. The only other thing that really stands out to me is the weight of the R-ball. I really like the globe design though!
     
    ryanmswartz, Apr 30, 2010 IP
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    I think it's too complex, you have many little elements in there that will not be noticed on smaller print
     
    antipot, Apr 30, 2010 IP
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    #14
    "thanks lot ryan. why with (R) reserved ?"

    If you're asking why I had a little issue with it (which is what I think you're getting at), I would say that in general I tend to think that most copyright/trademarks detract from an overall design. That is, unless they are purposely made to BE a part of the design. Maybe it's just because I've worked in the automotive field for so long that most of the time we're just trying to make the Rballs and TMs go away. :) Aside from the nitpicking, I did like the logo.
     
    ryanmswartz, May 1, 2010 IP
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    #15
    Logos need to be identifiable at very small sizes, in addition to large ones. Your text looks good, but I suggest simplifying your logo so it doesn't look confusing at a far.
     
    golfbunny, May 2, 2010 IP
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    Hi,it looks too complex,fill out and simplify the symbol,also fill the bottom triangles,since having them with that tiny outline will not be visible from distance.
     
    nellement, May 2, 2010 IP
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    nellement Active Member

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    also never put symbol like that,move the letters in middle in Vertical axis,NEVER make logo typography to look like "FALLING",move it little above and make symbol smaller too.
     
    nellement, May 2, 2010 IP
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    #18
    i like the logo but its not balanced and it also look week make the globe bold and balanced the inside material of the globe. this is my view take it positively
     
    archieangels, May 3, 2010 IP