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My entry, feedback Please

 

My three tries:

 

Heres mine.

 

Here is my first try in this contest
Feed back please

 

tickey:

Thanks for the revision. Its looking really great now. I like the 2nd concept best. Not to fond of the green Buzz though. Maybe play around with a few different other colours?

What I particularly like about your design. Is that its nice and clean. Brandable and gives the sense of an organization. But also the fact that it could be printed onto fliers and still look very good. Seeing as a lot of our promotion will be offline. Its very well needed in the logo.

CHSajid:

I like the web 2.0 element to your design. But just don't feel it has the WOW factor or brandability that Im looking for. The blue version is quite nice but it blends too much with the grey and they mash together a bit. Would be nice to see them a bit more separated in terms of their flow.

Mr Peters:

Nice logo however it feels a bit too simplistic to me. The idea of a lightning bolt is good. However its not very brandable as a lightning bolt is too commonly used.

vinpkl:

Nice new concept. However the students seem a bit too abstract for my liking. Also just doesn't have that wow factor.

NahumTakum:

Nice concept. I like the unique thinking with turning Z's into students. However it seems a bit dull at the moment and could do with some livening up.

masjacky:

Im liking the logo part. However there is a bit too much white space. Could you try rework the design a bit so that there is less white space? Also the text part of the design seems a bit too standard and plain.

HerDish:

Im really liking your design. It has a great concept to it and the colours look really good. However I will talk to my partner about it when he comes online just to make sure.

Chewysmom:

Really good job on the design. Its nice, clean and web 2.0. Brandable and has a wow factor to it. I can't really see any needed changes. But feel free to submit some more concepts.

Relwan:

Thats a stunning design. I really like it. Symbolizes what we want it to and looks really good. I can't see any needed changes but will double check with my partner. ( he may want some colour changes )

Fuentesana:

I like the concepts of the designs. However they seem a bit too simple for me.

SBHedges:

Nice design but a bit too simple for me. We are looking for a graphical image to go hand in hand with the text to form a full on logo. The text is nice but maybe work on the graphical side of things.

burzoman:

Sorry it doesn't fit the idea we are trying to portray. It has the idea of loneliness and isolation. When we are promoting collaborating and coming together.

 

I'll Be Posting soon .

 

Okay here is my second try
Hope you like it

 

something different

 

Here's My Concept :



Please Provide a Feedback , and any color scheme or style you want it changed.

 

thanks for the kind feedback
I'll submit another concept soon

 

Thanks for your feedback. More brighter shades of colors.

 

burzoman #2:

The overarching guy makes it seem quite dominating. The text could do with some livening up.

arnoldas:

Not to fond of your design sorry. Colours are too dark and don't flow nicely. And it has more of a poker theme which is way off what our site is about.

TightWad:

I really like how it looks vectorized. It would be fantastic on the net but not so sure about on paper.

khnfrhn:

The logo doesn't symbolize what we are looking for. It makes the site seem geeky and also promotes isolation which is not what we are trying to establish.

tickey:

Looks superb. Definitely one of my 2 favorites. No needed changes.

 

Thanks.
Also it has a communication feel (The white space between group of people also forming chat bubble), representing sharing of information, helping etc, more like a student community.

 

I changed it according to feedback
Here is new version

 

Thanks.

I'm glad to make changes, if you need.

 

burzoman:

Thanks for fixing the design up. However I feel that the text still needs some livening up. Seems a bit too simple at the moment.

Tightwad:

We appreciate the paper versions, but aren't too fond of the designs. Also try play around with some fonts as the current one doesn't have that nice flare/wow factor to it.

Relwan:

Your concept is really good. But could you play around and show some different colour combinations? Maybe include some light oranges / golds

 

My last entry:

 

hope you like it