Looking for Vector Illustration of 2 T-shirts - $25 - examples provided

Thank you for the feedback. here is my revision.

 

ooohhh. This one I like!

So far this is the top pick.

Just a quick small edit to compare - not necessary permanent but I would like to see if it isn't too much trouble: I am curious if it could look a little better for me if the (1) GRAY color in the back inside of the shirt is a little LIGHTER - maybe not so dark like it is now. Maybe something similar to the gray of your own logo that you show on top of it (the watermark). Also, I am thinking maybe (2) make the border lines on the collar shapes a little lighter/thinner line (the lines by neck right under the opening after that small 2-3 mm space...

This would help me perfect it in my eyes - I hope that's quick enough and easy.

Thanks!

 

Thank you, Sake7 - this is much much better. I would only be eager to see some more "movement" now in the shirt with some extra creases/folds here and there on the shirt.

I would put this in 2nd place now, but Dakouten is still first and most likely will have the design that I am most looking for...

 

What do you think about this one?

 

Dakouten - that is absolutely perfect! This is what I have been looking for.

You will be my top pick - but I will keep the contest open until tomorrow at 5 PM ET just in case maybe something comes along out of nowhere that is great...

But otherwise I will be going with this design.

 

Thank You.

I will be waiting then.

 

thank you for the prompt feedback!

 

my revision

 

http://rovarkungen.deviantart.com/art/shave-chewie-144280373
http://99designs.com/designs/60419-original

 

Hecky - thank you for pointing that out.

Sake7 - thank you again for your great efforts. Unfortunately this still doesn't really match exactly what I envision for both the style and "movement" etc. But I do appreciate your time and contributions. I would like to award you $5 for your time spent and hard work.

nayirpro - I very much like your design as well! Now with the darker lines it is much more like what I was looking for. However, Dakouten still has the one that matches exactly what I was imagining and hoping to have as final product. So I am placing yours as 2nd place. I still like it very much and could maybe be able to use it for something. If you can accept $15 as 2nd place prize and sell me the design then I would like to buy it as well. Let me know.

Dakouten - Congratulations! You have the winning entry. You did the best job of combining the designs from the 2 links that I included in my original introduction/post. You mixed the strong outline and "modern" look together with a good representation of 'movement' for the shirt. I like your illustration style. You will receive the $25 for the winning design + $5 BONUS that I would like to give you for your good work.

Everyone please PM me your details for PayPal.

Thank you very much for all the participation!

 

files sent - payment received - itrader + rep added
Thanks to blanktorp

 

Files sent, Payment received. Thanks for the nice contest!