i've created this blog recently. can you please review if it is rightly optimized? i want your view on the user experience...Ron. the url: http://onlinedatingproductreview.blogspot.com
Well, we'll leave aside that the whole idea of it is absolute rubbish (I'm a woman. I know. It is rubbish) It's also very dull - it's too wordy - it's not SEXY - "behests"? - behests is not a sexy word. There's too much text in long dull paragraphs, make it punchy - break it up with eye-catching subheadings. "So, I believe you need not try to be fun" - a blog definately DOES - what incentive is there for anyone to read through all that guff? Tell stories, make jokes, be outrageous!
thanks magda...i truly appreciate getting a review from a woman. and i'll surely work on the things you pointed out.