150 $ contest | 2 logos | PayPal | 4 days

Hi all,

Great effor from you all,

Just want to announce that I have increasing the prize of the Hand Character to 100$.

but has to follow the following criteria:
1- has to be original as much as you can
2- has to be live chracter, I mean it has to reflect happiness, has to be a life, has to be do activities, like holding a tooth prush, has to may be run or jump.

remember one thing, we want the kids to be happy, so please consider that as well.

but again I am still considering the other hand logos, which doesn't full fill the above criteria, but the prize will be 50$ as before. So the 100$ will be only for those which fullfill the above criteria.

now for the feedback:
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for sabosushimi,

nice try, althought I expect more from you, I am sure you can do a better one. waiting more from you

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For fujimoto,

I didn't like the place of the brush and the toothpaste, it doesn't fit well. I think if you can manage making the 4 fingers holding it will be a great touch, and may be another one, in which there will be a pocket which has both the tooth brush and the toohpaste. I am sure you can manage making this chracter more as a life chracter, waiting for your addition.

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fir jtoms:

for the hand logo. I liked the hand character that you made, a very good one and a very good chracter, can I see another one in which this chracter is a older ( I mean 6-7 years). making this will be really great, and will make it as a life chracter. good job.

for the clinic logo, I have to say well done, simple and proffessional as we requested, and making an example of letter head and busi card, gave extra credit. the only modification I need is more color variations.

waiting more from you, specially the hand chracter.

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for jaghanivasan

I liked the one with hear pic and the one with sunshine. I want to see more color variation and for the heart pic, I want to see something related to a lake.

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for JacoArmy,

I liked the color variation, but can you use another pic that the one beside the text. just want to see more varition. but I have to admit that I liked the idea of having a pic only without the test which can represnt the clinic, sometime this thing is very helpful, try to use different symbol or pic.

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for DrDesigner,

Have to admit that I liked your hand logo, I just really feel that it has the best smile among most of the submission, well done. Can you please what can this chracter do more, I mean can it have cloths, can it jump, can it do anything which gives the feeling that it is a life chracter. but again, I like the smile and how it looks, it is a happy hand

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for Sake7,

for the hand logo, very good improvement, but I am sorry to say that it looks to be a fat hand, can you manage to do more modifications. I am sure you can improve it more.

for the clinic logo, I think also you can do better one.

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For otakatun,

for the smile day, I liked how you managed to mke this character to have somehow an identity, well done, but can you show me what this hand can do more, and can I see it from another angle.and may be with complete hand open. waiting more from you.

for the lake clinic, I liked the idea of the L and C, very creative, but can you show me something which reflect the lake.

waiting more from you.

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for spbx,

nice and creative one, can I see more color variation.

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for Aderian

for the clinic logo, I think this can be improved,

for the hand logo, I have to say that it is simple and very has a great reflection of happiness. Good one. Please show me what can this hand do more.

 

Get your own ideas, I cant find the links but I know that the Bottom Left one is a exact copy of a logo on logopond

 

Smile Day Entry...

 

here's my try for the mascot:

 

Here is my try::




Feedback appreciated

 

Thanks for the feedback, here's another revision:

 

Thank you for your feedback.
Here is what I have now



I made two types of logo.
Let me know which one you like better.
Thank you.

PS: I can change the font style too if you want.

 

I put them in a business card and letter to see how they look



Don't care too much about the card design and letter,
I made it in a hurry

 

Actually got trouble to make the character running since it didnt got any leg, just want to know if you okay if the character had a leg. Below is the sketch, the running one got a leg



Let me know your opinion before I turned it into vector

 

As opposed to creating a running jumping clothed hand, thought i'd try something else i.e. a hand doing what a hand does, while still being a toon character.



Feedback welcome.

I'll try and redo the clinic logo when I get a chance tomorrow if there is still time.

 

I'm gonna drop out of the hand logo, cuz this is my favorite, no point submitting anything more or wasting my time on it.

Hope you still pick my Lakes Clinic logo

 

For jtoms

Well done with the lakes logo, I think I have no additional comments on it. lets see the final result when I set with my partners. Good luck

for the hand logo, I liked the young dentist you creat, can you show me what more thing this logo can do.

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for Dakouten,

for the hand logo, nice try, can you show me what this hand can do more

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for the spbx,

nice color variation, can you show me a green one

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for hafiz100,

I liked your third entry,

can you show me more color variation.

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for I3fty

very competitive hand logo, well done, mmmm, I was thinking, what it will look like if it is upsidedonwn, can you do that, but for mee I really feel that I look like a tooth and as a hand, very nice idea.

it be will be very nice to show me also what this hand can do more. waiting more from you.

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for jaghanivasan

for the hand logo, I just need one hand, can you try to work on one hand logo.

for the clinic logo, good work, can you show me more color variation

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for DrDesigner,

very competitive hand logo as well, good work. I really looks alive.

as I told I3fty, I am just wondering how it will look like if it is upsidedown. But again I liked you work. also you will be free to work more on it as it will increase your chances on the discussion day with my partners

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Fpr JacoArmy,

I liked your last entry, and bu making the busi card and letter head your chances become higher.

I have comment on it, but again, if you will show more color variation and more fonts and nice touch with the busi card and letter head, this will increase your chance on the discussion day.

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for Otakatun,

I have to say that this what I was expecting from you, and I am waiting more from you. no problem if the chracter has leg, it is your imagination.

just keep in you mind to try different color for this hand as I didn't like the color of the previous one.

Very competitive one, and Well done and waiting for the colored one.

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for aderain,

I appreciate you effort, and I can say that you hand logo is simple and easy, good Job. I have no more comment, but working more on it and adding more from you imagination will increase you chances.

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for Sake7,

great effort, it has a great imagination, I appreciate that from you. I mean I really feel that it is your own work and you are working hard on it and showing this will give you credit. I have no more comment, but as I have to tell u as I said before to others working more on it and adding more from you imagination will increase you chances.