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Product : The Gaunt On Cellulite
Niche : Get Rid Your Cellulites
Pitch Page : http://www.thegauntoncellulite.com/
Commission : 75% of $35.25
Hop Link : http://xxx.astent.hop.clickbank.net/
Affiliate Material : http://www.thegauntoncellulite.com/affiliates.html (Still under development)

Don't miss out, Earn %75 ($35.25) Per Sale Promoting "The Gaunt On Cellulite" Ebook...

 

I actually kind of like the design of your page. The copy is really (really) interestingly bad.

"Have you wondered if it's considerably practicable to look better, vibes better, besides raise your self-esteem 100% within 14 days by getting rid of cellulite on your habit? "

It's like a mix of Ye Old English and some bad Babel Fish translator or something...

Fix the copy and you got a potential winner...

 

Thanks your tip.I will fix.

 

how many sales do you get daily and how is conversion rates?

 

I'm no wowman so maybe I'm missing something but the name sounds kind of odd?

the gaunt on cellulite??

plus dont u think summer is the ideal time for this product?

 

"If you've exorbitantly wanted to lose your cellulite without expensive treatments, creams, wraps, and therapies that don't work, whence this is the incomparably important letter you bestow ever read..."

Ha, that's hilarious. It's like you've written the main sentence, then flipped open a dictionary at random pages and inserted any old word every now and then for "effect".

A few more great examples:

"Okay, agreement I enjoin you a tolerably obvious question:"

"Maybe you have a talk planned and the conceit of a bikini makes your tummy complex?"

"After my piquant teenager said this to me, I knew I never principal to hear that question again!"

Honestly, the whole letter needs rewriting to sort out the language.

 

No matter what others have to say about the sales page, it looks pretty good, unique and convincing to me. I'll start promoting this after a couple of weeks.
Good Luck!

 

A tremendous amount of time, money and sweat goes into producing a clickbank product like this. Is hiring an editor really going to break the bank? I mean, in the overall scope of the project, isn't the sales copy right at the top of the priority list?

I would be afraid that the product is written in the same style.

Say what?

and the testimonials are no better:

At first I thought maybe this was a joke page, but it seems to click through to a real clickbank order page...

I would recomend spending a few dollars and hiring someone to re-write your sales page. I'm afraid all of your sales will come from the high novelty factor, with most of those coming back as refunds.

 

I will try to sell these products, when sold, I will continue to do promotions

 

can you guide me to promote your products?? because i`am still newbie..

 

thanks for ur info.. i'll check it

 

True about the summer thing... or maybe spring.. in preparation for summer

 

love the layout and graphics....

hate the copy and ebook title.

you need to find a US copywriter and have him rework the copy and ebook. If your ebook is written the same way, you could expect 40% -60% refund rate! not good.

do some find tweaking and i will promote as i have a skin care site already!

 

Page looks okay, but don't plan on sales from some
little places like: US, CA, UK, IE, AU, ZA, NZ, EU, etc.

You need to put up an 'under construction' notice
and get an editor, immediately.

ClickBank approved this?
In Boise Idaho?
Wow!

 

this. get an english speaking (good) copywriter to fix that sales pitch.

 

Lo, henceforth I proclaim: regardless of the fact this product will doing away with terrible, terrible cellulite, it is indeed very much scary on account of the manner it elaborates sentences in the sales page.

Our hearts truly hearks in terror from the ominous chance the actuality of the product is indeed having written in a similar format. Woe, not wow! Action must be taken my friend, otherwise you won't easily forbid the gaunt of unabashed disappointment.

 

^^ brilliant. Verily, I call upon our lubricated friends to begin extricating posts like the aforementioned article all of the splendid time. And may you be bountiful

 

Thanks for your all your advices. I am working for new sales letter.

 

I re-launched to my product.Sales letter rewrited.Price has been reduced also.

 

I just has a quick read through and there are still plenty of errors.

Not having a go, but you need to head over to Guru.com or Elance.com and put a job up saying that you want the sales copy rewritten by an English speaker.

It is a shame because it looks like the copy could be good.

If you need any help posting the job or anything else let me know.

Chris