Please review My First Squeeze Page

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  1. #1
    Hi DP -

    I would like some feedback on my first squeeze page: Unlocking the Niche Code

    Any and all feedback is appreciated!
     
    WallerBlog, Oct 11, 2009 IP
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  2. aaron_nimocks

    aaron_nimocks Im kind of a big deal Staff

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    #2
    Looks good.

    Id reword this one though

    "Which niches are Hungry to BUY your product"

    Can be confusing on what you mean.
     
    aaron_nimocks, Oct 11, 2009 IP
  3. GoogleAdsenseFriendly

    GoogleAdsenseFriendly Peon

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    #3
    Just wanna say the design (templates) is so cool.
     
    GoogleAdsenseFriendly, Oct 11, 2009 IP
  4. Mmbillionaire

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    #4
    Its very nice. I like it. change "Which niches are Hungry to BUY your product"

    to "Unlock Hottest Niches where you will find Hungry Buyers". And it will sound better. The rest of the page is cool.
     
    Mmbillionaire, Oct 11, 2009 IP
  5. India Forum

    India Forum Well-Known Member

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    #5
    Nice page, Very good coding as well, But i tell you, keep this kind of page only if you are going to do some marketing in your site, otherwise change it now.
     
    India Forum, Oct 11, 2009 IP
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    #6
    You should make interest in the product a little more... extract of some of content

    Otherewise go for it. Correct the line as mentioned. :)
     
    mikea, Oct 11, 2009 IP
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    #7
    your template is very nice
     
    grini, Oct 12, 2009 IP
  8. WallerBlog

    WallerBlog Peon

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    #8
    Thanks for the help everyone. I've made a few changes based on the feedback above and in PMs. I'd appreciate any thoughts on the re-design.

    I've also moved the page to another server. Please use this link.

    Thanks again.
    -J
     
    WallerBlog, Oct 13, 2009 IP
  9. 4trahtibidoh

    4trahtibidoh Peon

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    #9
    text is too big
    but design looks good
     
    4trahtibidoh, Oct 14, 2009 IP
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    The design is very nice I like it
     
    alexff, Oct 14, 2009 IP