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  2. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    The landing page was not much impressive and the theme is very simple and basic one.
     
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    Aargh!!! map.bmp file is over 700 kb
    Convert it to jpg and make it, let's say, 30 - 40 kb. I had to wait for 20 secs for it to load.

    I registered and it told me "you are out of turns" I don't understand what it is, it confuses me and when I see your PayPal link, I just think you're a cheat. LOL

    What I wanna say is: your initial strategy is totally wrong. What you obviously want is - to build membership and to cash in. Make a trial version of the game. Let the people play for free and when they love the game THEN ask for money. This is the only way.

    Design wise. I like the idea. Sort out your header div

    This part is a mess:
    <h2>Turns:

    <h1>You're out of turns!</h1><h3><a href="./members.php?turns=t"><b>Click here to get more (300 per turn)</b></a></h3><h3>Or wait for up to 20 minutes and get 20 more</h3></h2>

    It is not displayed correctly in any browser. I don't think you can have header nesting. Anyway, there's no reason to nest them - clean it up.

    Somehow the design is too simple. Maybe it needs more graphics. Can you make the grey blocks more attractive, introduce some icons and stuff. Go to a library and get a book on medieval art - there are so many interesting symbols and artefacts in that period - you'll get a bunch of interesting ideas to play with.

    By the way, do you have any other games or is it your first one?
     
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    WeedGrinch Active Member

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    Yeah I messed up the register queries -- it's not adding people to the database, this is why you don't have any turns, gonna fix in a second.

    Get better internet IMO, if that really took 20 seconds to load then that's pretty bad D:

    Registration Bug Fixed
     
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    I have registered an account, it works well. You have put lots of efforts in this, congratulations.
     
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  6. WeedGrinch

    WeedGrinch Active Member

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    Thank you... Can't give anymore green rep out for 24 hours but I'll gecha later =)
     
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    Hahaha no problem ;)
     
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    really need graphics and colour
     
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    There is a 2d map...
    There are colors...

    Be more specific please.
     
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