I've been sent a few PMs recently asking me about copywriting/marketing and if there is any set system I follow. My short answer is this: it depends on what you're selling and your audience. To this end, I'd like to offer 5 people a complete copy/marketing memory dump. I'll look at 1 of your websites and give you a pdf full of my ideas based on what I see. I may offer an alternative headline, I may not, it really will depend on what you have so far. I won't know until I see it. Some people have an ear for music, I have an ear for copy and marketing ideas. But who am I? I'm not new to the internet game having done mentorship programs with Derek Gehl, Authority Site Center and an under- ground Hypnotic/Huna writing guru in Berkeley (done in person at tea houses). I've worked in the advertising industry as an actor, a writer and as a recruiter, but probably the most significant learning experience for me came from selling things on the street in San Francisco. As a result of all that, I'm an astute follower of people and trends I'll come up with things you may not have even considered. I do this based on the concept of transference -- what works in one field can be transferred to another and an ability to look at things from different perspectives. Since you may not have had the benefit of doing commission street sales, it's likely you may be tearing your hair out at times trying to look at your site objectively. Another pair of eyes (not related or married to you) will do this for you. I'm offering this service for $19 each for 5 people. I would ask that you send me your site first to review first, because if I feel you are already doing things well, you don't need my help and I'm happy to tell you that. If we do go ahead and you're happy, then a testimonial would be great. I'm also going to include a bonus for you about YouTube Optimization techniques -- simple things you can do to enhance this popular marketing method. Regards, Matt