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Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by toby, Aug 16, 2009.

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    Hi guys,

    I've decided to give it a try again after several failure on clickbank. This time, I tried to do a review page. Please provide your honest opinion on
    - layout
    - information
    - convincing factor
    - will you buy?

    Okay, here is the review page: ivybot forex trading machine.

    cheers,
    Toby
     
    toby, Aug 16, 2009 IP
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    Ripped Well-Known Member

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    The main image you have on there, is blurry, you cannot even see the numbers and all that, you need to fix that, since this is one of the main points of your review
     
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    toby Notable Member

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    thank you very much for the feedback. I now fixed that. is there any things else I can work on?
     
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    anil595 Active Member

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    Ivybot fact sheet is so good than main review page to me coz u given some nice points to refer easily but in that page keep one or two banners at side and make big link at bottom to Click easily .
     
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    ChrisBa Well-Known Member

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    It looks good for a start, get more content on there then review it again
     
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    Many features, few benefits. I've been in sales for over 20 yrs, a sales trainer/coach as well as a fellow internet marketeer and my opinion is that the page is lacking in benefits. Almost all of your text is devoted to what Ivybot will do, but nowhere do you explain what that means FOR ME. For example, you say it performs 2 - 6 trades per week. That's fine, that is a feature. Now what does 2 - 6 trades per week do for me?? That's the benefit you need to focus in on. Remember that every reader will always ask the same question... "WIIFM? (What's In It For Me)"

    Ultimately, no one cares about the features of your product. People only care about how those features will benefit him or her.

    "2 - 6 trades per week" = feature
    "means twice the opportunity to make MONEY!!" = benefit

    Make sense?

    Good Luck!
     
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