Guys, you are amazing! So many new/improved entries in one night! What a start into the new week Mike S.: Thank you for the revision! In this post, the image shows up (didn't in your first post). I like the cyclist, although you're right about it taking the eye away from the name. Don't know yet which version I like better. No problem for the time, I completely understand you can't spend more on this. After all, you have made two good entries - thanks again! ipdesign: That's better! Especially the first one, the 3 seem to do something together (whereas the 3 in the second each do something on their own). The whole logo still looks technical, but it goes into the right direction. Fraz: Very technical and clean, but good ideas. I like the 3rd the best, it has style. The "let's get active together" message is lacking though. shawnmcterry: Haha, "I've seen the Future" - that one's good! Can I enlist you for the marketing campaign? I don't like the ribbon, it reminds me too much of political initiatives (support our troops, free tibet, aids day, child cancer awareness, ...). Nothing against these initiatives, but it's not the right message. The silhouettes are too passive. As your entries look very artistic, why not let them paint, perfom music, play theater? Or, as the hand prints are already there, a family letting their children play together, smearing paint on a car? Might be hard to do... I'm getting carried away by my fantasy, your drafts inspired me Wickedd: Much better, but still too technical. I miss that "get active together" message. Speech balloons and the person in the middle are good starts. Can you get more people in, doing something together? ing_pacz: The second is too abstract. The first is quite technical/abstract as well, but there's some people in it. Maybe you can let them do something? Like seeing a movie? Adding some other activities would also be nice.
Wickedd: You keep getting better! I still miss the activity part, something dynamic, but you're headed into the right direction.
My entry : 100% Vector .AI format Anything can be changed according your taste. Feedback gladly appreciated! Kind Regards, Hugo
Hugo Dorfling: Too abstract, I miss the "let's get active" message. Pictograms representing activities inside the speech balloons would be nice, they would bring a bit of life into the logo. shawnmcterry: You like to experiment for sure, I appreciate that! The message in the logo isn't very clear, at least not to me (the fields with numbers - is it a board game?, the passive silhouettes), but I like the artistic look, the running kid, and of course the hand prints. So even if you decide not to do another revision, there's already several good and new ideas in it - that's what I'm doint this contest for
HugoDorfling: Yeah, much better! The "active" is there, and the logo starts to live. If you could add some more pictograms, some that represent group activities, that would be perfect. But already as it is, your entry is a good draft to give an idea what the logo could look like - thank you!
witcher: Wow, you're the man! Both your entries are a blast! They look alive, they show different activities - great Thank you!